I loved this so much! I was in tears when Roxas was talking about his past! Great job that was an awesome story!

Great fic!
The storyline was done really well, i just love stories that have a past or childhood part.
Ax and rox and the others were crazy great!
Really good funny parts and cute and emotional and everything! Ahh! And lemony parts were wonderful!
Love love love!

I tried I really did...I wanted to like this and I couldn't. Story makes no sense. Way too much swearing. If Axel is from a church I doubt he'd curse like that and especially not at a kid. Can't tell where Axel's parts are and where Roxas's are...The story just tends to jump around without making sense...Sorry...

Ooooh, that was so good! Like, it was so cute Adam's funny when Roxas sat on Axel's lap XD
Definitely on my fav's list, can't wait for more