Why you stop?!

Into the keyhole! I wonder what'll happen next...

Finishing on the newest chapter and I got to say I can not wait to see more soon, and keep up the good work.

Joshua returns :D I love how he's acting, as he said, the omnipotent character in the fic.

I think it was great to have Sora develop the dreams too, before things really got started. It's best to get the feel of the characters first before diving into the main plot in my opinion. The whole scene with Tifa makes it more significant how perhaps Kairi would be more determined to get back to her own world in the end.

Riku still cracks me up. This is probably irrelevant but his Japanese voice actor could actually pull of a character likethe one he's doing now, so imagining this is just extra great.

As for the fic's reception... Hmm, well I think it probably takes a bit of time to gather a larger following, maybe? I haven't seen your other fics, so I'm not sure what level of reponse you're hoping for. But rest assured, I think this has been a pretty interesting concept so far, and it's not bad at all.

I personally like reading this and hope to see what world we'll move onto next.

-Dina

Gosh, this is a really cool fic. I haven't found the beginning chapters boring at all - quite the opposite, in fact. I'm quite a big fan of interlinking parallel worlds and things like that. Heck, the fact that the first world is anime suits me just fine. (But the question is, is this shojo or shonen? Dun dun dun.)

I love Kairi and Sora's interactions here. Sora is beautifully happy and cheerful and all for justice and Kairi is cool ad always. As for Riku -pats back- oh, while he's outlandish it really adds to the comedy factor. 'Jesus' he called Sora xD (but little did he know Kairi in fact really talked to Jesus -cough- Joshua -cough- jesus beams).

Roxas really did go down the dark path. I admit, I completely thought that Keyblade Man was Sora. Seriously, it was really well done. You got me.

Am really enjoying this and can't wait to read the next chapter :D

Uh... Yeah, I kinda noticed a grammor error, you see when Kairi was rambling about that weird guy calling and telling her that if she went to Paopu avenue or whatever it's called and said that something exciting would happen she said "If he ever calls again I'll have to thank him for his sidekick ways.", or something close, any way instead of sidekick, she should of said phycic ways. Just thought I'd point that out.

You do know that you didn't get any reviews because of the fact that you removed the original Chapter 1, right?

In any case, Sora still is Keyblade Man.

Keyblade Man the JUST.

Roxas is no Keyblade Man.

Finalllyyyyyyy got around to reading this! School's got me swamped, yo. It took 5 snow days for me to find the time to get to this haha.

Anyway, let's start!

The chapter was pretty long, which I don't really mind. One thing I did notice, though, was that not much happened here; a lot of it was filler information, which is great to get more background on all the characters we have here. Not necessarily a bad thing, but something I thought was worth pointing out.

Riku's such a prick. Omg. I really hope he gets major development throughout the story, 'cause I honestly don't really like him much at all right now. Part of it is also that overdramatic anime vibe he gives off, too, so I'm wondering what he's gonna be like when that eventually wears off!

I'm not sure how I feel about Kairi's relationship with her mother, tbh. It's kind of all over the place; like, you can tell she cares a lot about her, but I feel like that respect isn't really there - which may be something intentional on your part, idk. But it's always just rubbed me the wrong way when people call their moms "bitch." Again, nothing to complain about writing-wise there, but more just a personal pet peeve of mine.

I honestly just can't wait 'til we're out of this anime-style dimension tbh lol. Don't get me wrong, it's fantastically written - I sensed the vibes even before you affirmed that this was the kind of mood you were trying to pull! This kind of anime just isn't really my cup of tea anymore, if that makes sense?

Other than that, though, the chapter itself overall was pretty well-written. And it's not like the content is bad at all, either, it was just me pointing out my personal preferences/likes/dislikes so I hope that doesn't come off the wrong way!

Anyway, I still can't wait to see where this goes! Hope you update this soon :D

Still think Keyblade-Man is who I think he is.
Thanks for the cookie, though :3
*munches on virtual cookie*

In any case, great chapter. Now, if you'll excuse me...
*leaves while readying keyblade*

Nice story

Nice story I really like the way it's going

Sorry it took so long to get to this second review, had a couple of errands to run.

Again, I liked this chapter! Your endings with cliffhangers are a really smart choice, I'm definitely enticed. Another thing I like about this story is that, so far, it's definitely more focused on the friendship aspect of things, which is refreshing to see! A lot of people (including myself) tend to run with romance, which is cool and fun to read, but it's nice to take a break from that and see something different :)

I like all the characterizations so far - I feel like Riku's gonna be a pretty dynamic character throughout the story. Kairi's personality's fun and cute to see, and Sora's pretty awesome! I can't wait to get to know them better!

Only complaint I have is the same one with the last chapter - the wording can be awkward at times and descriptions feel a little forced in some places, so be wary of that! I'd definitely recommend just doing some reading on the side of actual published books (since we're all amateurs on this website, technically speaking) just for the writing style; it helps get a feel for wording and hopefully inspires more writing of your own! :)

Ooooh you finally put this up! I was so excited to see this :D

I'm glad you split up the chapters, and putting up chapter 2 right away was another really smart decision on your part. The tones of the two chapters, from what I remember seeing, were completely different, but both were necessary, so I think you made the right decision :)

CLIFFHANGERRRRRRR can't wait to see where this goes - how WILL Kairi react to Sora and whatever prophetic news he unveils? Guess I'll have to read to find out!

Okay, before I go, one thing I just wanted to point out - I did notice the awkward wording once again here. Some words just didn't fit in the sentences you used them in. For example, "she tried to keep her mind SOUR of her fear" - correct me if i'm wrong, but I'm pretty sure "sour" isn't a simile of a better word, like "free", "empty" or even "void". I noticed it a couple other places as well. Be careful when you use that thesaurus; always try to see that word used in a sentence as an example before you use it yourself so your writing looks more crisp :)

But, yeah, other than that, great start! I look forward to reading the rest :D

This story's got me interested... :) Can't wait to see what happens next!

Huh. The first chapter gave me a feeling of Spider-Man, and this one...wow, I like this Sora kid. Unfortunately, I've seen too many detective shows and I've already figured out who this KeyBlade-Man is. I'm not saying, though. This chapter (and the previous one) was awesome. Yeah, I would've typed out one for the first chapter, but I read the first two in a row. Great job, Palette!