Okayyy so I just finished it, and I really liked it.

The first part, with Regina being blackmailed by the author, was heartbreaking. God, I just wanted to step into your story and hug her. I was wondering if maybe Robin would be able to persuade her to not follow Rumple's instructions and let him go/die/pay the price, because not helping the villains would have been the right thing to do, even if it involved a sacrifice. But finally, you handled things just perfectly. When she says "I know who I am", everything is said and settle.
But seeing her so broken, so fragile, not even being able to be strong in front of all the charmings, it was another Regina and I appreciate that you explored that version of her temper.

As for Blue, I do believe you're not very fond of her. I mean, I don't mind, I'm not a big fan either, but you pictured her like a real bitch (sorry, but that's how I felt it). I'm glad at the end, she's the one who loses everything, because I think that if you are good, you need to see the good in people. All of them. A little bit like Snow.

The fact that you were able to use a lot of spoilers we've got from S4B and gave them an explication was awesome, especially because I do believe most of what you said could totally be true (like Lily's origines for example, which would explain why she's suddenly part of the story).

I really appreciated that you made a point that Maleficent's friendship for Regina may not be over. With the episode we actually got yesterday, it actually is totally understandable. If friendship was an actual ship I would definitely ship those two !

The fate you reserved for the Author was perfect. I do hope in the show he won't be such a bastard, but in your story, being trapped in the hat was perfect. Too bad the Chernabog isn't inside the hat anymore. And Robin's speech about the Author not being more worthy than the villains... Perfect !

I think I pointed out what was more important to me. Thanks for this story !

I'm so sad this story is over, but I love how it ended. Really, great story ) thanks for writing it!

Yes please write the one-shot it will be awesome ! Loved your story from the beginning to now the end loved it

I can't believe this story is already finished ! It was amazing ! I really love it !
I hope you will write again !

Love xx

im so sad this is over this was my favorite fanfiction

I loved this but it was heartbreaking that Roland lost his mother again :( .

Yes

Excellent chapter!

That's a nice way to almost wrap it up, sad to see it go but it's been great, thanks for writing!

I loved the last chapter - using the hat was a great idea!

OH MY ! Belle, my hero :D
Can't wait to read more !

Love xx

Very very good! I cant wait for the next!

I liked this! I reall liked it! I loved everything you did with this chapter, I love how you fleshed out the characters and had everyone work together. I really enjoyed that part. I loved how you went back to the end of Season 1 with what Snow said to the Blue Fairy. This was a really good chapter and I'm excited for the epilogue!
Take Care,
Xx

Omfg wow. That was an awesome cliffhanger! Can't wait to see what you do next!

Oh. My. God. Where on earth do you get such AWESOME ideas? You rock!