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When I first read this chapter I was like 'OMG I'm so happy you updated' then when I re-read all of the chapters I was like 'Dom better not break Letty's heart'. His love for her seems so deep (more so than in the movies) and he just got her, it would be stupid of him to do something to hurt her. I hope Dom confides in Letty so she can help him get the heat off the team and clear their name. I really liked Johnny, but he's becoming such a dick. He was the one who gave Letty an ultimatum and she chose her family. It's messed up of him to to be upset over their break-up when he was the one who initiated it. The direction of this story and Dom and Letty's relationship is exciting and I can't wait to read about how the team finds out about their relationship.

Update soon,

Paula

I just finished reading all of the chapters of this story and I have to say that I'm in love! The plot/story line is great (there are minor spelling and grammatical errors, but they do not interrupt the flow of the story) and has me desperate for more. I love how you developed the characters of Dom, Letty and Johnny Tran, what I loved more was how you became the first person to make me actually like Johnny Tran (up until the last chapter that is). I think that you made Letty's character exactly like the movies (with the exception of the first two chapters), especially now that she has her new attitude towards life. I'm glad you made Dom finally realize what's been in front of him all of these years and man up to his feelings. I know real life gets in the way of things but I do hope you have not forgotten about this story and will continue. I'm anxious to find out what Tran has planned, when the rest of the gang (Han, Giselle, Tej, and Rome) come to town and what Dom's forgotten plan after the heist was.

Paula

Ooh. Getting more exciting!

Ooh! I smell DRAMA!

I freakin loved this fan fiction. It had all the things I wanted and needed in a good story. But that cliffhanger is a big hit to the face. But glad I read and I will read more of you stuff. Thumbs up and keep writing

Whoa! WTF?! Johnny broke up with Letty weeks ago! HE broke up with HER! Not the other way around. Don't make thtis into some "Letty is cheating on johnny with Dom" story! It makes Letty seem like such a bitch!

Johnny, who started out as the coolest guy, is turning into a psychopath! And if he thinks there is ANY way that the cops are going to take Dom in but not Letty (who was actually seen and shot by the truck driver) he is delusional!

I am hoping that Johnny is honest when he says that he wants Letty to be happy. I hope that Dom somehow proves to Johnny that he's a better man now; that he loves Letty more than anything, that she's not just the next in his line or whores! Maybe Dom risks his life for Letty. Something to prove to her and to Johnny that he's serious. And once Johnny sees that Letty loves Dom and that he actually loves her (and isn't just using her for sex) I hipe johnny leaves them alone.

There is no good outcome here otherwise!

Love the non-sex loving too! Dom cantnpossibly be honking of leaving Letty after telling her that he loves her and that they have the rest of their lives together, can he?!

Doms infatuation woth Letty is adorable! I love how in love they are!

But it's getting exhausting with him thinking that he has to leave, but that conversely he won't do it until he "has" to. Is he Seriously thinking that he will leave once the police show up at his house? Is he seriously considering abandoning Letty o go to jail without him? Because if the police show up for him it will only be because they are ready to arrest Letty and are including Dom in the list of suspects. The truck driver saw Letty not Dom. The driver shot Letty, not Dom. The police will have a good case against Letty, not Dom. It's been literally weeks since the heists! Im not sure what is taking them so long...

And what is DOM'S plan for supporting the shop and Mia if he just skips town? What about his responsibilities?!

The sex was hot and ibline how focused on letty's pleasure Dom is... Maybe some reciprocation? Show us that no one makes Dom come the way Letty does too! :-)

PS I am going to assume that Dom had himself checked for STDs before sleeping with Letty. With the sheer number of skanks he's been with, it is almost impossible that he doesn't have chlamydia at least-and the insert Letty is using doesn't protect against stds at all!

Lol! Loved the morning after stuff. Doms freak out about not using protection (a guy like him who sleeps around would be used to using condoms! Like all the time!).

So sweet that the love continues! :-7

Great story! I am still confused about the first several chapters and how AU the story is. First we have Letty inexplicably in love with Dom to the point that she shows up to lay her heart on the line literally minutes after Dom was sleeping with some random racer chaser. Inassumed this was a teenage, immature Letty who has a crush on Dom and isn't wise enough not to go declare her love for a guy who is screwing around with another woman. (Ps. If Dom slept with anothe girl Ayla and lettt showed up to tell him she wants him, doesn't that make her the "other woman" and trying to cheat with Dom?).

Then suddenly we discover that Letty is not only NOT a teenager, but has her own awesome place and life. She seems like a mature woman who gets what she wants. And yet we hear that she has been sitting on the sidelines and oining away for Dom while he apparently sleeps with half of LA. the mature and strong, beautiful and hot, kickass woman that Letty is wouldnt wait for several years to go after Dom. She would have done it before and then (if Dom said no) would have moved on and met another guy.

Glad she dated johnny but it took me by surprise to learn that Dom and Letty and all the guys had been robbing trucks together long before chapter one. There was literally no mention of it earlier!

The trust it takes for the team to pull their in-motion truck heists is huge! Dom and Letty would have to be super close to do that kind of thing over and over. It was weird to not see some of that in your story prior to that. And even weirder to see Letty get hurt (almost killed) the very first truck robbery we hear of in the story. We have no backstory as to why they were robbing trucks to begin with! And not only are Letty and Vince not taken to jail (for unknown reasons) but Letty (who has been shot and nearly killed) talks about continuing the robberies like nothing has happened! (Is she an idiot? What happened to smart/mature Letty? Vince was also almost killed. Even if she jinks nothing of her own life, you would think that almost losing a teammate would make her at least consider her actions more...! A normal person would say "OMG, I almost got myself killed, and for what? A few extra dollars? And I almost lost Vince, man who is like my brother! Is it really worth all this?! " not "no, Dom and johnny, of course I want to keep doing robberies. Don't tell me what to do, I just want to keep robbing trucks no matter the sequences!" Keep in mind that Letty wanting to keep robbing trucks is even more stupid when you consider that the cops are all over them now! The police are not idiots! The truck driver who shot Letty would have reported that a woman tried to beat him in his truck and hat he shot her. The police would then match the ballistics of the bullets the doctors took out of Letty with the truck driver's gun and she would go to jail-whether she faked amnesia or not!). Finally; it wasn't until this chapter that we even know why Dom was leading the team to rib trucks. Why then was Letty even involved? If she didn't know that the whole point was to help save the shop and get mia through school.

Rant over.

I love that you are showing Dom coming clean with actual emotions after making sure we saw him being the most triffling player of a guy in all the early chapters. It's nice to see Letty has a healthy skepticism too. Particularly after his total shit down of her (insane) declaration to wanting him.

But I am so confused why Dom doesn't think he's good enough for Letty! He says "I can't be good enough for you. I will never be on the right side of the law; and I've got gasoline in my blood." Um... Is t this the same Letty who also has gasoline in her blood? The same Letty who is cheerfully involved in robbing tricks? She is *exactly* like Dom. So why the hck is Dom saying that he's not a good match for her? Did Dom not read the first chaoters of your story?

I think you need to figure out who Letty is:
- shy girl who puts her heart on her sleeve to tell Dom she wants him (even though she know be just came out of the room after sleeping. With some random skank who showed up at his place of business-klassy)
-mature woman who has her own place, has good taste in wine. Is worldly
- immature girl who refuses to even consider the consequences of her actions
- hothead girl who is willingand abLe to risk life and limb for the thrill of jumping from moving cars into moving trucks...?

Pick one! If Lettt is a sweet why girl and Dom is "too good for her" hen why is she taking part in all the heists?
If she is the strong, kickass, fiery Latina who drives like a banshee and has no problem with armed robbery of moving trucks, then why was she waiting around for Dom all these years? And why would Dom think he is all wrong for her?

I LOVE that Dom told Letty he loves her! Bravo! At least he put his heart on the line similar to how she did earlier in your story! (But I was a little put off by the fact that he came to tell her he loved her and she gave him a blowjob first. Seems really creepy that their first sexual encounter was not the two of them making love but rather her giving him oral sex...)

Great story! I am still confused about the first several chapters and how AU the story is. First we have Letty inexplicably in love with Dom to the point that she shows up to lay her heart on the line literally minutes after Dom was sleeping with some random racer chaser. I assumed this was a teenage, immature Letty who has a crush on Dom and isn't wise enough not to go declare her love for a guy who is screwing around with another woman. (Ps. If Dom slept with anothe girl Ayla and letty showed up to tell him she wants him, doesn't that make Letty the "other woman" and trying to cheat with Dom?).

Then suddenly we discover that Letty is not only NOT a teenager, but has her own awesome place and life. She seems like a mature woman who gets what she wants. And yet we hear that she has been sitting on the sidelines and pining away for Dom while he apparently sleeps with half of LA. the mature and strong, beautiful and hot, kickass woman that Letty is wouldnt wait for several years to go after Dom! She would have done it before and then (if Dom said no) would have moved on and met another guy.

Glad she dated johnny but it took me by surprise to learn that Dom and Letty and all the guys had been robbing trucks together long before chapter one. There was literally no mention of it earlier!

The trust it takes for the team to pull their in-motion truck heists is huge! Dom and Letty would have to be super close to do that kind of thing over and over. It was weird to not see some of that in your story prior to that. And even weirder to see Letty get hurt (almost killed) the very first truck robbery we hear of in the story. We have no backstory as to why they were robbing trucks to begin with! And not only are Letty and Vince not taken to jail (for unknown reasons) but Letty (who has been shot and nearly killed) talks about continuing the robberies like nothing has happened! (Is she an idiot? What happened to smart/mature Letty? Vince was also almost killed. Even if she thinks nothing of losing her own life, you would think that almost losing a teammate would make her at least consider her actions more...! A normal person would say "OMG, I almost got myself killed, and for what? A few extra dollars? And I almost lost Vince, man who is like my brother! Is it really worth all this?! " not "no, Dom and johnny, of course I want to keep doing robberies. Don't tell me what to do, I just want to keep robbing trucks no matter the sequences!" Keep in mind that Letty wanting to keep robbing trucks is even more stupid when you consider that the cops are all over them now! The police are not idiots! The truck driver who shot Letty would have reported that a woman tried to beat him in his truck and that he shot her. The police would then match the ballistics of the bullets the doctors took out of Letty with the truck driver's gun and she would go to jail-whether she faked amnesia or not!). Finally; it wasn't until this chapter that we even know why Dom was leading the team to rib trucks. Why then was Letty even involved? If she didn't know that the whole point was to help save the shop and get mia through school, why is she so adamant that she wants to continue? Is she greedy for money? Is she an adrenaline junkie?!

Rant over.

I love that you are showing Dom coming clean with actual emotions after making sure we saw him being the most triffling player of a guy in all the early chapters. It's nice to see Letty has a healthy skepticism too. Particularly after his total shut down of her (insane) declaration to wanting him.

But I am so confused why Dom doesn't think he's good enough for Letty! He says "I can't be good enough for you. I will never be on the right side of the law; and I've got gasoline in my blood." Um... Is t this the same Letty who also has gasoline in her blood? The same Letty who is cheerfully involved in robbing trucks? The Letty who is also on the wrong side of the law. She is *exactly* like Dom. So why the heck is Dom saying that he's not a good match for her? Did Dom not read the first chaoters of your story?

I think you need to figure out who Letty is:
- shy girl who puts her heart on her sleeve to tell Dom she wants him (even though she know be just came out of the room after sleeping. With some random skank who showed up at his place of business-klassy)
- outgoing and mature woman who has her own place, has good taste in wine. Is worldly and goes after what she wants in life.
- immature girl who refuses to even consider the consequences of her actions
- hothead girl who is willingand abLe to risk life and limb for the thrill of jumping from moving cars into moving trucks...?

Pick one! If Lettt is a sweet why girl and Dom is "too good for her" then why is she taking part in all the heists?
If she is the strong, kickass, fiery Latina who drives like a banshee and has no problem with armed robbery of moving trucks, then why was she waiting around for Dom all these years? And why would Dom think he is all wrong for her?

I LOVE that Dom told Letty he loves her! Bravo! he put his heart on the line similar to how she did earlier in your story! (But I was a little put off by the fact that he came to tell her he loved her and she gave him a blowjob first. Seems really creepy that their first sexual encounter was not the two of them making love but rather her giving him oral sex... Partly because it was so quickly over and then He spent his time with her. Seemed reallt Imbalanced. )

But the deepness of making love when they finally did was beautiful! Probably a first for Dom after his life of one night stands.

johnny is sent dom in prison?