I just realized that the book was the Heart of Darkness! I had to read it for AP English too! Great job here!

Was it the Heart of Darkness (the horror! The horror! The PTSD coming back)? And I thought Congo was more colonized by Belgium?

Haha what a series of (un)fortunate events that was! Nicely done.

I don't like it rather... I LOVE IT! I kept re-reading this fic and hoping this would have a sequel of some sorts. Oh my... I really want to know what would happen after that. Pleaaaaaaase write another one? :'(

Make another one

I'm Congolese! Just saying

Love their interactions, it was thrilling, exciting, and down right funny. You had me when bubbles said that butch had a love at first sight with buttercup! Honestly you can even expand this story into a full fledged series, and i'll still follow and read what you have to write. That book must be made of air, if it could fly in the wind, haha. Have to say I was quite surprised that Brick was quick to throw punches, as what could be his hotel guests. But interesting nonetheless. It's quite alright for you to use the OCs, fan fiction is all about using preexisting characters and you putting your own spin on it, I mean vampire, werewolves, and war stories, it's just the beginning, if your just starting now, hell put your own unique characters if it brings life to your stories. Your story was definitely refreshing to read, and would like to see where your imagination brings you. If you do plan on making another PPG fanfic, I would like to see two dynamite greens, fall in love!

Finish finish finish! (Really I can't stress that enough)

I loved it! It's really great for your first fanfic :)
I didn't think any of them were too OOC. Can't wait to see what happens!

Love it with all my heart

Wow...just wow...!?

This is such a great story!