Reviews for The Dark One |
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mickeygirl20 chapter 18 . 5/16/2015 Loved it! Can't wait to read the next one! |
dmmjel chapter 18 . 1/31/2015 really good job you finish stories fast and there really good too |
dmmjel chapter 15 . 1/31/2015 Omg her arm I thought it was her real arm I was freak out like what? |
WindyRowboat chapter 16 . 1/31/2015 I knew it! |
Disney fan5 chapter 15 . 1/31/2015 Oh yea mickey vs the dark one now THAT is the ultimate battle |
dmmjel chapter 13 . 1/31/2015 Ooh it's getting real gooooood |
Lizard5699 chapter 8 . 1/29/2015 I am on the edge of my seat please update soon! The story is intriguing even though I want to like punch The Dark One. I hope they soon figure out that the cure is Amanda kissing Finn/Dark One. That's how Luowski was saved! By the way I like the plot twist with Greg and Jess being together. |
ddk chapter 5 . 1/25/2015 i like your idea but i think that you could have developped it more like dont announcing mfinn was cursed, so he could be amole or tell them that he was kidnapped, and make a big reveal in a crucial moment that the keepers needed him, that way it would be much more impacting and have a lot of emotional impact to the keepers. is there other samples of that potion? he could try to corrupt the other keepers? please put less chapter about finn's mom, she is not very interesting. instead of using luowski as finn's replacement, you could use a new chacter, a oc, someone that really could be finn's replacement? and please explain the ot's plan. has finn got any power, as he is evil as hades chernabog and maleficent together? perharps he could corrupt others. thanks keep writing |
WindyRowboat chapter 5 . 1/24/2015 Does anyone not realize that Wayne said "True Love's kiss can break ANY curse" As in Amanda could kiss Finn |
jenny10j chapter 4 . 1/20/2015 Awesome! Love the story! Please continue it! |
dmmjel chapter 4 . 1/20/2015 Oh my gods Greg now that was unexpected |
kelphead2 chapter 4 . 1/19/2015 huh. i guess even Hades can have a soft heart after all. but man, Jess and Greg... that's a new one. |
kelphead2 chapter 3 . 1/18/2015 could you please not be so cruel? i'm preparing my feels for the year, i shouldn't have to use them this early on! |
kelphead2 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 *gasp* Finn? nooooo! why? WHY? |
dmmjel chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 Will there be famanda even though he signed evil or skmethingike that and really good by the way |