DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Kid being pure, now THAT's a hell of a concept!

Great job, yo!

Ryuichi

Perfect. Thanks for writing!

FAN!~

Omg. /dead... This makes me so happy.

Omg I don't know what to say... That was fabulous when explained. I love it.

Very very hot, awesome character interaction and story development - all one can hope for with a great (and smexy) one-shot!

omfg one of the best threesomes ever aaaaannnnd i'll happily take Doffy off Law's hands... -drools at R-18 perverted erotica-

I've so long imagined and longed for (quite a specific) scene in a fic...where Kid eyeing Law and then discover he's the Big Bad Boss Doffy's lover when Law sort of clings to him smugly, LOL. U have no idea how overjoyed am i to finally find it here XD

The story is hot, the setting is great and combines my two main fav pairings..KidLaw (OTP) and Doflaw...and now KidLawDofla. What more could i ask? XD

Haha that was interesting to say the least. I hope that you do write more kidxlaw stories as they are my OTP but it is always interesting with doffy. Keep up the great work! xoxo

whoaa *_*
awesome! I like this shot very much. Keep on writing! I would like to read all of your AUs :D
Cheers

It doesn't matter what you upload, be it an update or a new fic, still satisfies my fix for KidLaw or Doflaw. I love the dynamic you've chosen for the threesome. Everyone plays nice and everyone is happy. There's no extraneous detail, makes it feel like a well-told fairy tale that teaches a lesson. I wish everyone wrote like you. I love your style. The events are told bluntly and it moves the story move along smoothly. I felt like even this short fic could have easily been a ten chapter drawn out drama but the way you executed it was perfect. It sounds like you still have tons of plots in your twisted head to write and develop. I can't wait to see any and all of it. Will be on the look out. Thank you so much for all this delish. Makes me fall harder for my favorite pairing. Keep it up and more importantly, have fun writing.

Can you make a smut with Kid double penetrated by Doffy and Law?

Gosh I love your work, the way you write is just the best! Long live mob AUs! That sudden ending killed me lol though I imagine Kid's heart wouldnt calm down till he heard the OK from Doffy still.

You write such wonderful things, and this is just all kinds of perfect :)