One of the best stories of pokeshipping that I have read...beautiful emotions..it's painful too..n it's amazing to think that ash and misty have a child ...m really disappointed that u discontinued it :(..I wanted to know that happens next...I hope u complete it one day :/

NO! Cliffhanger! *sighs* at least someone picked this up.

I bet Chiharu is waking up.

...if only Nurse Joy knew.

So Chiharu is missing.

So she'll tell him the next day?

So Misty is having to stay...

I wonder who Erika was talking to.

Well, Chiharu IS Delia's granddaughter after all.

So Delia calls and there's a cliffhanger.

It's been ten years...and I regret not reviewing earlier.
This story was quite heart-breaking, and the mistakes and the arguments were very deep. Ash's obsession with Pokémon created a great opportunity for a plot, and the way you made it was heart-breakingly beautiful...in a way.

I'm a little bit sad that you discontinued this story, but I admire your honestly with the author's note in the end. I completely understand your inspiration loss but hey, the story was beautiful while it lasted...

~Guest

please write the next chapter
this is awesome story

Next chapter! Now! I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER!

FUcked up ending

Heartbreakingly sad but also good