update! I wanna read more. ..I wanna know what happens

Wish the chapters were longer.

I'm so worried for Fred! I hope the Kupua don't like eat him, or something terrible! lol I hope you post more soon! I'm so anxious to see where this is going and I hope Fred gets back to Lizzie okay. PS, Fred is being obstinate and perfect. lol

This story is so cute! I can't wait for another update! And don't worry about taking a while to update; take your time. It'll be worth the wait!

Please please update again! I love this! It’s so sweet and cute!

I love this!

Omg, yay you updated! This made my day, and I loved the chapter, too! It was worth the wait, and I can't wait to see how Fred responds the results, and what's going to happen next! Also, I'm so glad Lizzie said no! Really hoping to see more soon since sound like you figured out where you're headed now. :D

Yay, I'm so happy you updated! :D I've been waiting to find out what happens. I love your new character, Hades. He was pretty funny. I can't wait to see what they tell him, and what the hell happened with Joyful Jimmy. I hope there will be more soon?

Please please please please please update i wanna see them togther!

Yay! At last! I enjoyed this very much. He's never gonna live that jack-in-the-bow thing down. Mwahaha. Now where's the next chapter? *big puppy dog eyes*

I hate cliffhangers hahaha. Really well written. I'm so glad someone out there actually writes DDF doc that's not 80000 years old and never updated. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Hi Great story are ya gonna finish it i really want to know how it ends :)

Gyah! I must know this "one way!" This is getting really good. :D I liked this chapter and really hope there is another update soon. I especially loved when Fred was so proud of his drawing, until realizing Fartpants would never see it. lol So totally Fred. Thanks for the sweet mention, by the way. Always happy to help. :D

OMG I LOVE this movie and you do a fantastic job bringing it back to life PLEASE keep it up :D

Aww, thank you for the note! :D You're so sweet, and Fred is impossibly cute in this chapter! It was definitely worth the wait. I can't wait for more. You're doing an awesome job for your first time writing. One thing I would suggest is not to put actual speech in italics because then it gets confused with when it's done to show thoughts. :) I hope that helps. Can't wait for more! :)