That was the most sweetest, cute book I have ever read. I just loved everything about the book. I may be late reading this,but I must say you are one of the best writers on this site. I can only guess that you are a really popular writer because not many people can write books as well as you did this. Thank u for giving me an awesome jelsa fanfic to read.

So,in chapter 6 why doesn't Tooth give Elsa her memories? Because that could help them out to know about Arendelle.

Awesome so far

I'm reading your fic and, don't get me wrong, I like it, but I think that this chapter is confusing. First, if you're following the storie line of The Rise of the Guardians, it's strange that the year in the fic is 1880, because the time in the movie was like the actual USA.
Second, why is not Elsa in a painting? Okay, they could not notice, but it's weird. I think that this details are important in a fic.
Take care, I'll continue reading for two reasons: one, I like your fic, and two, I need answers.
Pili

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They both have been i a castle because earlier they went in Elsas ice castle

Sandy is a BOY. A BOY.

CUTE! I loved it! This was so awesome and cute and fluffy and I don't want it to be over!

Thanks for the ride! :D

God Bless,
Tauriel Skywalker

Haha! Bunny is so clueless! I love it! XD

OH! Jack didn’t know she had built the ice castle yet.

"Um hello. We are in the middle of Pitch’s lair and you two are shooting the breeze!” Kill joy. ;)

Aw! He hugged Olaf! :)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! SHE KISSED HIM!

When did Jack get class? Ah, so he reads. Do you know how much cuter that makes him? ;)

Crap! Hans! Not good.

AH! He took Anna!

Whaaaat!? Gustav believes?!

AH! Anna’s son married Rapunzel’s daughter! I love it!

She sees her!

“Let’s take a look inside the castle.” Guardian of Fun? More like Guardian of Mischief.

I love how poor Elsa is just questioning everything and while she seems to trust Jack, she absolutely does not trust him at the same time.

AH! Pitch knows her!