really good story, flowed nicely :D

You have a nice writing style. Great one-shot!

I love this! A great interpretation of Maleficent and Diaval's relationship. This story was captivating and I love how you tied it into the film and managed to fill in the silence between the two characters and create a great story in a small amount of writing. Also love the repetition.

Very nice. I really like it, you're a great writer! The way you portrayed the characters is very believable. Good job!

This is beautiful, darling. I'm so happy to see new work from you!

Woah, this is amazing. I love the concept! Thank you for sharing!