I know this was written ages ago but I must have missed it but oh these two sentences had me laughing out loud- in a coffee shop much to peoples bemused looks and my embarrassment lol the first was this

As the finger found the edge and slipped around, moving the panties to the edge, Shaw found her legs opening slightly wider. Traitor legs, thought Shaw.…that is just what Shaw would have thought lol

Then this one

Shaw could feel the end coming near. She thought she let out a tiny moan OhmygodfuckI'mnotmoaning

Brilliant
Mx️

It was a cool story! Thanx :)

Ohhhh my ;) Love love love! These two must be so fun to write, I should try it.

HAHAHA! Good old Root, always having the upper hand, and literally too. Great story!

Hahaha.. good one!

Damn!
Damn hotttttttttt!
Wow...
Amazing!
Great fic!

God...your fic is just perfect ! You're an amazing writer ! I'm so glad to read your fic until the next season of POI !

Thank you !

(sorry for my english, kiss from France :*)

really good work

Awesome!

these are great, you should definitely write more!

This was a great fiction, I loved it and, of course if you can write more... I will read it as soon as I can.
Good job, I hope you won't stop writing.
A.

I let you know, I LOVE your work xD

i love your work, i would love to read more for this pairing

I just wanted to clarify that I am in no way advocating sexual advances made on sleeping or unconscious people. This scene exists because the sexual attraction Shaw has for Root is so great it's spilling over in all aspects of her personal and "professional" life, and she's just now starting to realize that (and isn't happy with it).

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

That crossed the border into creepy and perverted. Touching a woman while she's unconscious is disgusting and wrong since she's incapable of consent. It doesn't matter if youve had sex with them before, it's still flat out wrong. Yes Root,was conscious, but Shaw didn't know that and yet she still did it. That's fucked up.