OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO GOOD. Sorry for the caps. Seriously, though, that made me tear up a little.

Terrible. Awful. How dare you rip my heart out like that?! No but seriously, your goal was to make us cry? You accomplished that in the second paragraph. Well done. Next time I need to make someone weep, I'm coming to you...

Awe :(
Crystal

I am broken-hearted! As always, Great job!

Looks like you were up for the challenge!

Yep, I am an idiot, pulled up this chapter 'cause I need to cry more. It was an interesting chapter because of the rage in the letter. Until the next to "Make this not be..." line. Which is the line that choked me up.

The heck Blue?! I mean it's awesome. But I can't feel impressed by it because all I feel is sad. A whole lot of sad. A lot of sad that is never going to go away. And it's not Oliver's fault now. It's yours. I still love you though.

Lou, this was beautiful! You did a perfect job capturing Felicity's feelings. I've told you before you have amazing talent. You write humor like nobody's business and now you're demonstrating that you can write serious emotional angst like a pro too. Keep them coming please! I'm glad Jen picked your story as one of the top three. Congratulations! Now, I'm going to go wipe the tears off my face and blow my nose! Thanks!

Wow my emotions !

Beautiful.

That was sweet

Yes it almost made me cry. Loved the bit about him being on time. Otherwise so very sad, and great like all your writing!