Reviews for Magic's Apprentice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked where this story was going. Sad there is not more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story. I wish it went on further. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please keep going with it please |
![]() ![]() ![]() LR - Harry and Ginny are so cute! PC - Oh no! You had to bring out her romantic, lovey-dovey side. LR - :glares at PC: PC - :grins: Both - Please finish this fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still really enjoying the story. I liked Ginny and Harry in the trunk, and that Ginny healed Harry. . Loved that Hedwig found the kids, and hope you'll have more conversations with Harry and animals. . I'm looking forward to seeing who the stranger is with whom Albus was talking. What is he doing at Hogwarts ... and whom is he replacing.? . Will Harry go speak with the giants.? . Please continue soon. . Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah... LOVE the story. I really liked Harry's "dreams." Loved him seeing what the world would have been like if he'd not survived. That was done so very well. . I liked his time with Merlin in the timeless place, and his training. I especially liked Harry getting a chance to talk to Lily, and getting the right answer to the question of who he is. Again, very well done. . Well, I'm off to the next chapter. . Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good! hope to see a new chap soon |
![]() ![]() Hey, u got a cool story though its a bit outdated I think u should continue with what u started provided u have the time & put a note saying whether u will be continuing or not... Congrats on the story & hoping to c ur not... Bharath. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! You have a very nice plot and the start was amazing. the only problem is that it seems to be winding down(quality wise). Dont rush the story, explain everything in detail, it will help to 'hook in' the reader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is amazing and beautifully written. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way too bad you didn't continue this...I was hooked...it was a brilliant story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Now, just who is this mysterious man that Dumbledore has summoned to his office? I don't know, but I can't wait to find out! So, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() Ginny and Harry together in a trunk... It is getting better all the time. David |
![]() ![]() I will review every chapter...only if the book is very Good! SO ... here is your 4th review in 4 chapters. Bravo! David |