Reviews for Between Vows
alphonseMuchaLucha chapter 15 . 12/20/2016
I've had the tab for this chapter open on my phone for what feels like weeks, bubbling in anticipation. While getting to the end of the chapter I started feeling "oh no, could this be the end?" (I hadn't read the introduction, oops). It has a very organic "ending" feeling, very real and very human. Had what Gilbert felt been overwhelming then I would feel like it needs to develop more, but they've been in a relationship for 6 years now. It's like they've always been together but just finally realized it. I definitely don't regret following the story for all this time, I know I'll remember it, and I'm glad that it became more than a oneshot. I look forward to the extra chapters! Great work, Mayumi!
JeSuisUnePomme chapter 15 . 12/13/2016
Hooray! What a happy thing to come home to! Thank you so much for sharing this story - it's been a delight to follow!

Xo Apple
Noire Knightmare chapter 15 . 12/13/2016
Aw, that was awesome-so glad to see that those two idiots finally got together :D
Crimson cat angel chapter 14 . 6/30/2016
Love
ConfusedCosplay chapter 14 . 6/21/2016
3 yes, yes, this chapter made me so happy. my little nerds confessing to each other 3. i love the way you did it to, that is definitely how Roderich would confess and it was amazing
alphonseMuchaLucha chapter 14 . 6/20/2016
Last chapter I said you had kept me on edge, and you did it again! But well, I guess that just adds to my excitement whenever I see a new chapter. This story is just wonderful and I'm so happy that they finally got to express their feelings! I can't wait to keep reading!
cinkun chapter 14 . 6/13/2016
Wow Roderich you and your little essay is so aristocratic even in this confession scene. Good job you little bartard XD
They took 6 years to know each other's true feeling but things in the end were worked out! They were now being together yayyy! :D
So I'm looking forward to seeing this (future) lovey-dovey bastards hahaha. They sure made a good couple!
Also thanks for your hard work :)
Autumn Moon Fae chapter 14 . 6/12/2016
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I love this so much, you don't understand
Thank you so much for the update! I love Roderich's essay-long speech, it feels so *him*, and Gil's reaction to all of it throughout - priceless! MY HEART
CodeVassie chapter 14 . 6/11/2016
First of all *screeches*
Next, thank you so much for writing this story! And translating it into english! If I had never been able to read this fic then I feel my mind library thingy would have been for the worse without it. It was funny and interesting and these idiots are finally less idiots now! Yay confession! I love how no one is a 'villian' in your story because there really aren't any villians in real life. Just people with different beliefs and perspectives. Not only that, though, but while you have nice round characters (that's what they call real, relatable characters, right?) you also have it from Gilbert's POV which relays his emotions very directly causing strong reaction in the audience. So we understand but we also have the emotions that make the story real. Naturally, we can be pissed off at everyone yet want to give them all hugs at the same time!
Sorry for the long review. I got a little excited haha. Thank you so much again and I look forward to more!
Tsingy-Me chapter 14 . 6/10/2016
I'm... ENCHANTED!
I almost thought you were giving up on this!
Thank you for coming back!
I can't wait for the next update!
I want more of this!
AnonymitySix chapter 14 . 6/9/2016
I'm dying from love out there...
These two dorks are too cute to be true ! Their mutual confessions were really moving. (Gilbert, I do admit you could have done it in a smoother way. Though it's more realistic like this )
Picturing the young lord with a blushy-embarassed face was adorable OwO
I remember starting this fic one year ago and I'm glad they're finally able to come a term with their pining /frustration

They're wondering themselves "What should we do, now ?"
If I was being my fangirl, bulbous self I would order them to just get married already xD
But I know it would be a bit too quick. And hell, they have to find a wedding planner better than Gilbert. Which is very, very difficult w
It's cute how the characters evolved since the first chapter. I feel like a doting parent smiling stupidly at their children because they're growing up and it's adorable x) Though you're their true mother indeed ;)

I look very much forward to the epilogue ! Thank you for granting us so much quality, as usual.
Good continuation and have a nice day, filled with love ~~
Haru Kuwamine chapter 14 . 6/9/2016
Can I just... KYAAAAAHHHHH! Do you know how long I've been waiting for this?! I've been waiting for AGES!
I love you so much right now!
Roderich! You! I can't even explain you! Just be togrther already!
Misaki Haninozuka chapter 14 . 6/9/2016
Oh my! I was honeslty going to sleep early today but then I found this fanfic and I simply couldnt stop reading! Your writting of Gilbert's point of view is awesome in the way that you can say "yep thats totally him"! And how you show they both made mistakes is wonderful tho I feel a little bad for Vash ahaha.

Honestly I think it was super adorable how lenghty Roderich's confession was and Gilbet ended up saying it in two sentences, I think it goes perfectly with their character. Both their cluesslessness was adorable too and in general this chapter almost made me tear up in hapiness!

I had never really seriously read a fic for this ship before but I am certain that this is the fanfic version of a marterpiece and if I could I would print it and bind it because it hit me in my heart, honestly, Gilbert knowing every cue related to Roderich's expressions and emotions made ME think of a certain person i fell for like that. Your writting honestly touched me, and I want to thank you for taking your time to translate it, I know that sometimes plasming ideas from your language to english the same way is hard so I admire and deeply thank you for giving me the chance to read this since I dont completely understand portugués! I hope you have a nice day!
gdesertsand chapter 14 . 6/8/2016
Wait...
who was the supposed guest then?
The one Gilbert supposed to meet before Roderich came?
gdesertsand chapter 14 . 6/8/2016
This story...is precious!
I like the way you portrayed Gilbert's character. I like the way you write Gilbert's point of view and how he can form biased conclusions based on Roderich's actions. I like the way you write this story. And...was that a Sherlock quote I just read? It was? You just made my day happier!
Oh and the last part that have a bracket I think 'fluttering' will be a better word choice in the sentence.
For all the PruAus fic that I have read so far that has a humanAU, this is probably the best I have the chance to read yet.
I really hope to see another update soon!
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