I know it’s lost too much ... but it does the naruto and kurama scene making peace and working together..the important parts of the war ... and naruto willn’t even have children? ... and I’m loved the story and already read 10 or more..will the story continue?

Interesting read

this is beautiful...

shikamaru and naruto isnt my favourite ship (you know with sasuke and naruto being cute or itachi and naruto) i've never been interested with these unusual couple. to be honest i was bored because there are no new interesting plots to be read regarding my ships and that was why i tried to read a shika naru one. i dont know what to expect really when i saw this story as the top result in my filter. the 7k hearts was definetely one of the factors but even then, sometimes they can be false. so yeah i gave this a shot. another thing is, i dont like when authors decided to make naruto as a girl because idk i just got a weird feeling like naruto somehow became sailor moon? lol.

anyway after reading the first chapter, i was intregued by shikamaru's mind. its sooo him. and as i read the other chapters, i just realized how underated shikamaru is when in truth, he is an amazing character. compared to sasuke, like ok he's handsome and powerful af but his attitude sucks and naruto deserved better than sasuke. i started liking how you potray shikamaru in this story as well as the other character. it was like you knew them inside out. and you got their style really well.

at first i was sad that sakura got bashing but after realizing why you did that including the reason why naruto hell bent on taking sasuke back... its amazing and very logical. i mean compared to the anime, i really dont get whats so great about sasuke when he doesnt even act moderate to naruto but here... i just feel very satisfied with your plotting with every character. beautiful.

and i'm kinda glad that i just got to read this now? because i cant imagine waiting for you to update after a cliffhanger. and usually i only spend a day reading 100k words, i didnt check how long is yours is but damn... 3 days straight!

i also like the details of every scene, like the deers, the forest, the way shikamaru rambling his feelings and how in love he is, the dates, the others pov of their developing relationships, and the necessary drama or violent scenes. they were all well balance.

i'm just hoping that after all this wars that shikamaru and finally naruto got a happy life (with their childerns and all) and hopefully u didnt decided to give away this story for adoption because i'm sure the adopter wont have the same style as you are and the story might ended up disappointing us all.

Very very well done. wonderfull story. you should consider being a writer yourself, who knows what will happen

this is beautiful...

shikamaru and naruto isnt my favourite ship (you know with sasuke and naruto being cute or itachi and naruto) i've never been interested with these unusual couple. to be honest i was bored because there are no new interesting plots to be read regarding my ships and that was why i tried to read a shika naru one. i dont know what to expect really when i saw this story as the top result in my filter. the 7k hearts was definetely one of the factors but even then, sometimes they can be false. so yeah i gave this a shot. another thing is, i dont like when authors decided to make naruto as a girl because idk i just got a weird feeling like naruto somehow became sailor moon? lol.

anyway after reading the first chapter, i was intregued by shikamaru's mind. its sooo him. and as i read the other chapters, i just realized how underated shikamaru is when in truth, he is an amazing character. compared to sasuke, like ok he's handsome and powerful af but his attitude sucks and naruto deserved better than sasuke. i started liking how you potray shikamaru in this story as well as the other character. it was like you knew them inside out. and you got their style really well.

at first i was sad that sakura got bashing but after realizing why you did that including the reason why naruto hell bent on taking sasuke back... its amazing and very logical. i mean compared to the anime, i really dont get whats so great about sasuke when he doesnt even act moderate to naruto but here... i just feel very satisfied with your plotting with every character. beautiful.

and i'm kinda glad that i just got to read this now? because i cant imagine waiting for you to update after a cliffhanger. and usually i only spend a day reading 100k words, i didnt check how long is yours is but damn... 3 days straight!

i also like the details of every scene, like the deers, the forest, the way shikamaru rambling his feelings and how in love he is, the dates, the others pov of their developing relationships, and the necessary drama or violent scenes. they were all well balance.

i'm just hoping that after all this wars that shikamaru and finally naruto got a happy life (with their childerns and all) and hopefully u didnt decided to give away this story for adoption because i'm sure the adopter wont have the same style as you are and the story might ended up disappointing us all.

Very very well done. wonderfull story. you should consider being a writer yourself, who knows what will happen

I love this 3

I just stumbled onto this absolute treasure! WOW! I am sooo in love with this!
I love the smooth and steady pace, and I especially love how you focus on the time in between the main canonical events. Your developments of the characters has kept them steadily growing in a realistic manner- the changes from canon are rational and purposeful.

Please keep updating! I just can’t wait.

- Artie

P.S. I would love a chapter from Ino’s perspective. Especially after the whole Children of Iron thing.

so... so far so good, You still got the shadow possession mixed up even years later (he doesn't get recoil damage only the shintenshin Yamanaka's use does that) :P but it's a good story. Back to children though. Naruto can easily fix that problem the same way she regenerated Kakashi's eye, and all good versions of Naruto have all wanted children a family. So if you don't let her fix herself since she'll be able to by the end of the war you're gonna need a very good reason not to IMO. Again good story thank you.

Sooo yeah shadow possession doesnt worm that way or he'd have hurt himself when he beat kin, its ino's jutsu that has rebound on her own body when the one she possesses is hurt.

is this over or will their be more cause if there is then I can not wait to read it

I actually like the way you have gone about this. Too many good stories are marred by having excessive kissing and/or sex scenes. I like the more realistic pace.

go under the wall but the gates good too.

Cmon!

Come on already!

I hope Naruto is a girl

Still not promising...