Fun fact: I read your story thinking about Iwagakure's Kurotsuchi, as I badly needed this stupid crack I love to death but nobody else ships. ;)
I love the way you wrote Kiba, all cocky and sexy, untamed beast making my knees go weak every time. You brought everything I fangirl over about him up and did it in a admirably well-done way. Also, Akamaru was a sweet pie he is, good job on his character, too! I really like it that he played a role in the story and the relationship between him and the OC.
Oh, and quite important for a M story - the lime was hot. I bet you know it's not the case with every story ranked like that. ;)
Please keep up the great job! :)

This was really great. I'm so glad you didn't just go with the expected doggy style I see everyone else do. The beast within twist was excellent.

Kyra is officially my favorite OC right now.

And this is also the first time (out of 200 fics) that I have read smut in the first person, and lemme tell ya, that was so freakin amazing. I don't mean that in a weird perverted way, but that was the coolest thing ever! Whoa, damn. You're awesome...

I actually think this is a well written story (even thought it's smut xD) I hope you decide to write a story! (Maybe even write a story about this OC!)