Yayy theon didnt get involved in ironborn rebellion and yayyy he arya didnt get married to elmar frey...i wasnt sure if there would still be a red wedding since arya would have been there for her wedding too so the freys would have got two immediate alliances to the king in the north compared to one immediate alliance to robb's uncle and one future allianceto arya after the war... i wonder how harrenhal amd house of black and white will go though...will she still train to be a faceless assasin? How? Awesome chapter!

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Loved it! I’ve not come across an Arya/Theon ship before but you’ve convinced me!

I can't wait for the sequel! The story was so amazing... I've never even imagined this pairing and now that I've read this I can't just stop loving this pairing! Arya is my favourite character and you add Theon to this (whom I'm rather partial about) I got the best Game of Thrones fanfic I've ever read. Thank you so much for writing it! The plot was excellent, the writing was fabulous,...made my day. All the best!

I could never see Theon/Sansa as a couple, I really don’t in all honest give much thought to Theon Greyjoy either and when I do they are not positive thoughts however I like the fact that he saved Sansa at the end of season 5. There is also something about Theon Greyjoy/Arya Stark as a couple that seem so right and so natural and now thanks to you I consider them another one of my many favorite couples.

While I am a fan of Robb Stark, I could not stand him in this story and hated what he did to Theon/Arya, especially Arya. While Theon betrayed Robb in the original universe it seems like it was in some ways the other way around in this AU. Not only did Robb betray Theon in this AU but Arya as well. I cannot help but think Arya probably would have ended up hating her brother, maybe eventually end up running away, if for some odd reason the red wedding had not happened in this AU. Robb was not better then Walder Frey/Roose Bolton and was nothing but a jerk that only cared about himself and his own self-fish needs. As far as I am concerned Arya was better off with Robb dead and that stupid twit he married got what she deserved. The only thing I am sorry about concerning the Red Wedding in this AU was that so many people had to die for Robb’s selfishness /stupidity. Keep it going, your writing is amazing.

This was precious. I cannot wait to read what happens next. :3

and now i read that sansa is going to see daenerys... i hope she isn't like in the show... an arrogant princess who think its her birth right to come to a kingdom who don't know about her and don't care about her and bring fire and blood

i hope she would be useful against the other
and that would be nice if she married jon... LOL

but i just read till chapter 37..; so ... i don't know what will happen...
... Suspence...

its a very well writen story,
good imagination
and i liked it you made it not to horrific...

so i wanted yu to understand that yur story has an important place for me

ok, so i writed so many reviews because i felt sorry yu had so less with that masterpiece of work

to bad, would have be nice like in the books, that she survived somehow...

so after her dream of her dead family, even her mother it dead, she didn't survived

but i read arya could make it, she killed me, that cool

i was quiet afraid you would let that bastard bolton get away with a rape