Reviews for Harry Potter and the Fractured Apocalypse
Thundramon chapter 22 . 7/3
Definitely not what I expected in a very good way, Thank you for writing this amazing story
epain chapter 22 . 3/27
This was an interesting story. Thank you for writing it.
Thrasher Blew chapter 22 . 1/3
I have a lot of stories in my favorites. This is one of the few that truly deserves to be there. Your mystery was enrapturing, but more than the mystery, the understanding that Harry's actions had true consequences, actual consequences that you didn't shy away from was what so enchanted this story. Bravo!
Guest chapter 22 . 10/2/2019
That was interesting and I liked Harry's quest. Fun. I don't think the ending would work- the RL and wizards mix? It would create wars and chaos IMO.- but it was well done. Kudos.
BinarySobriquet chapter 22 . 8/2/2019
Great story, thank you for writing and sharing it with us. I stayed up four hours past my bedtime reading it, but it was totally worth it.
Bob Schwartz chapter 15 . 8/2/2019
Welcome to Thermodynamics I amirite? Very enjoyable read, nice clear comments on the nature of pressure in 2-phase systems. I’ve always been of the opinion that creative, engineering and physics applications of magic would allow a normal wizard to overcome most defenses, so it is nice to see it implemented. Cheers!
Sakura Lisel chapter 15 . 7/26/2019
Hey I just thought of something. Seeing how old Harry is now, and depending on how long the magical world has been frozen, how old were Draco, Ron, Luna, Ginny, etc. when Dumbledores freezing spell hit and would they STILL be that age when/if the spell is broken? *lol*
Sakura Lisel chapter 14 . 7/26/2019
Hey I have a few questions. When Harry brought up the internet, cell phones, etc. to Narcissa, HOW does she even have a CLUE what hes talking about?
1. Shes a Pureblood witch raised on a muggle technology free lifestyle so she shouldn't know ANYTHING about what Harrys talking about when he brought it up. *lol*
2. Even if she somehow DID know about what Harry was talking about, depending on how LONG she and the rest of the magical world have been frozen BEFORE Harry showed up, were things like cell phones, internet, etc. even AROUND back then for Narcissa to have ANY kind of knowledge about it in order to be arguing with Harry about WHY the wizarding world DOESN'T use it instead of using owls? *lol*
MsSiriuslyBlack chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
My head hurts..your story was so different , the concepts , the fundamental difference between the muggle world and magic as explained by Narcissa, and Harry's eventual reconciliation of both sides, just mind blowing.I don't know if I'm smart enough to even review it correctly. Need to read it a few more times:) For what its worth I loved it. Great job!
Son of Whitebeard chapter 22 . 7/26/2019
A Happy ending
ginoeh chapter 22 . 7/26/2019
I really liked the writing style in the later chapters. I got on board after chapter 4 only a few weeks ago and while at the beginning I was a bit dissatisfied with the "missing" storytelling (I was expecting something more like chapters 1 through 4 and so it felt a bit rushed at times) the new style turned out to fit your storyline very well!
And speaking of the storyline: It's definitely unique. I don't remember reading anything quite like it in the HP fan fiction world so far...
I'm also really glad the rate of chapter turnout went up after I put the fic in my favourites list. Usually, the opposite happens... ;-)

Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 22 . 7/26/2019
Very entertaining story and concepts. So glad you came back to finish this.

Here's hoping for more! :)
ArthurShade chapter 22 . 7/26/2019
Nice story
Artur Hawkwing1 chapter 22 . 7/25/2019
That, was an amazing ending. EXTREMELY well done..
MossSwan chapter 22 . 7/25/2019
I'm slightly confused... What happened to magic? What happened to all the frozen students and teachers and death eaters, etc?
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