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My review for the third chapter should have been on this one... sorry!

I Knew it!
Well kind of... I assumed the Country Ryoshi served was her, the previous ruler being Shiro, the fog being the past(That he can't control), but I got the idea. I really liked it, despite the fact that Black Butler and OHSHC as well as many others have already done a Alice in Wonderland OVA, but it was nice, because you took it a step further with the realization. I also like how you've incorpirated Little Mermaid and the Six Swans so far. I'm currently working on my own Okami-san fanfic featuring the Pied Piper and Wee Willie Winke, and I'm using yours for inspiration because it's so true to the original show. Every time a character says something I hear it in their voice and it sounds like something they would say. It was a bit weird to not have the Narrator in this chapter but I digress...
P.S. I think Ryoshi needs to tell the girl who stole Ryoko's voice this or something along these lines: Ryoko's secret isn't your weapon, because if you tell anyone know I'll come after you. Don't think of that as a sword, but rather a shield, the only thing between me beating you up. I'd hold on to that shield.
Edward Suoh

una pregunta recien leegue aesta pagina y esto es la novela o q es lo q es esto?

por fa explicame qes esto es despues del anime manga novela?

You are a very talented writer. It just sux that this anime is sooooo underated and nobody can see your amazing piece of work. Plz continue the story.