FMA reference!

Make more chapters please

You should keep writing this! It's an awesome story so far!
If you do continue it it'll end awesomely I'm sure!

what will natsha do...

That was so nice of Lyon to help Natasha, by telling her the deal was a joke. I wonder how he feels when he said that. And I can't believe it almost ending even though I had this feeling it was going to.

Well... Im confused how the end of story... You can make it like shoujou but your previous conflict will become a waste... Or you can torture gray... But watch out.. Every conflict is important...before adding it.. You must prepare the resolution and its conection with the ending... Many fic died because the author cant finish a conflict... If you already knew it... Im sorry..

Lyon you flying asshole you were responsible for her bad performance! ugh.

I likeed the story!
Pls update soon...

Go Get Gray!
And did you read the new chapters? I can't I believe I never thought of that. I knew I was slow, but there was a lot of hints.

Okay why ain't gray there. what the hell is he alright. is Ur alright. did I mess something in previous chapter. maybe.
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Dark

at this rate lyon gonna win the bet..no...

Omg. I've been obsessed with this story for the past two days, I've been binge reading again. (*-*) oh well.
Anywho, I think Natsha will eventually get with gray, so lng as that bastard Lyon doesn't screw up my otp.
And OMFKSSKAJXNDI JUVVIAAAAAAAA
I can't wait for her to come Into the picture! Maybe when she does, Lyon will forget about his pinkett and go for the bluenett ;)

That probably wasn't the best way to handle his confession... And now Natsha has a feeling of hatred for him, well at least she thinks she does. Unless I'm getting this all wrong, oh well. Please update soon!

Nine more chapter. That's a lot. And I'm glad he turned out good, but it doesn't justify what he did to Juviva.

so gray have to work hard to win natsha..