This is VERY well done. I look forward to seeing its completion.

In your poll I voted Cat, but my thinking is something like the Cat from The Spearmaster and the Black Cat light novel. Cute little adorable kitten/cat that can transform at will to Nemean Lion sized monster cat (or bigger). It would be funny if Naruto pretends to or doesn't notice when it changes (It only does it when he is not looking). Keep up the good work as always.

He should have a Stallion or a large tiger for a pet. Also maybe he could be allowed to unlock the Uzumaki Chakra chains?

If your eventually going to give naruto a bloodline my vote would be for either chakra chains or mokuton. You know something that he could believably inherit.

Your writing skills show's why you are at the top of favourite section of Naruto.
Hope you feel inspired to write some more.

I came across your story just 2 days ago... It's so well written, that I kept reading way past my normal fanfic time and have reached chapter 23...
I can't wait for more...
Please continue...
It was suggested in one of the previous chapters the schedule is placed in your profile page, but it is not update for the next update list...
Great story
HarryJanusUzumaki

Typically, I'm not one for harem fic. Your other fic had me give this a try. I'm glad that I did, since it's so slowburn it shows you're taking care to have them become friends long before falling in love.

I don't approve of Sakura being a reward for persistence, though! That's not how it works! I hope your opinion changed from that since that author's note. Along with saying that the failure is the friend zone on the quest!

Look at it from her perspective! A guy is being nice to you, but all along he only did it because he wanted a reward, not because he's nice. And your Naruto shows over and over that he is nice and a good person.

You should have him remind Sakura that he does still consider her beautiful and would like her as more than a friend, while making it clear he won't push unless she wants to do more. That's the way to do it, not keeping silent.

He won't be able to get her to accept since the game mechanics stop it, but this is the moral choice he should take. Not being deceptive, even if he doesn't mean it to be. Getting his intentions in the open will suit his personality better, too. It might even open up avenues for the other girls to talk to him about their intentions later, but that's your call.

I reread it and I still want more. I hope the gods bless you with lots of inspiration and ideas.

Really well written. Love this fic. Might actually start this one again just to keep it active in my head.

Poor Naruto, stuck in the D-rank hell. I wonder how the girls will handle the chakra mutations?

Another great chapter.

more please keep typing and please reply

You should try looking into a manga named 'Yoakemono' and see Jinrou's dual wielding sword style. I think it's perfect for Naruto's style, and if you add shadow clones to the style, like Gekko Hayate's, you cand even put the last move in the manga where Jinrou, who's a mountain wolf, and his superior, who's a different wolf, become the fngs of an even bigger wolf. It's awsome.

I read the whole thing in a single day! I love this fic so far, please keep updating fast :D

Finally done with the reread and catch up. Looking forward to more.

interesting on the details side of things and setting up for later