Reviews for One Leader Part One
Anime chapter 4 . 2/29
... is it either Uta no Prince or Black Butler or I feel like there’s another one...?
LavaLilly chapter 28 . 1/14
it's just getting started, oh that was amazing.
Janza chapter 1 . 8/27/2018
Deemo! 3
Guest chapter 28 . 6/4/2018
TSUCHAN FAMILY PLS REMEMBER HER AGAIN PLS LIKE HOW LAL AND I THINK VERDE REMEMBERS HER AND MAKE SURE TO ONLY ALLOW TSUCHAN LOVER TO BE ARCO TEN GEN AND VARIA AND GINGERBREAD THO I THINK A HAREM WOULD BE BETTER AND TSUCHAN LOVERS/HUSBANDS WOULD BE REBORN BEL GINGERBREAD XANXUS HAYATO KYOUYA FON MUKURO AND POSSIBLY TAKESHITA IF HE TURNS TO TSUCHAN SIDE AND EVERYONE IS VERY OVERPROTECTIVE OF TSUCHAN AND WILL KILL ANYONE WHO DARE HURT TSUCHAN OR CAUSE HER PAIN AND TSUCHAN MAKE SURE THAT YOU GIVE PAPA BERMUDA AND MAMA ENMIL AND YOUR UNCLES SOME CUTE KIDS AND MAKE SURE TO MAKE TSUCHAN MORE BEAUTIFUL AND CUTE
verysadtimes chapter 28 . 3/20/2018
I can't believe I missed the update notification for this... But I'm here now, and I really, really loved this story. Sure, it had its ups and downs, but it was very enjoyable and I'll definitely re-read it again one day with a smile on my face :)

I'll be going on straight to the second part now
Guest chapter 28 . 3/8/2018
THE PART WHEN TSUNA KISS HIBARI WAS HILARIOUS THO IM NOT HAPPY ABOUT YOU MAKING THEM NOT REMEMBER TSUNA ANDBHOW XANXUS HATE TSUNA NOW! THE VARIA BETTER NOT HATE TSUNA AND THE PEOPLE WHO TAKE CARE OF TSUNA BETTER REMEMBER HER AUTHOR OR ELSE!
DALucifer13 chapter 7 . 2/3/2018
Considering how well tsuna is getting along with the arcobaleno I assume she may become their sky.
Either that or the sky to the day and night arcobaleno.
Deacog chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
One mistake that really stood out to me is that in one paragraph you said that Tsuna's eyes were "brimmed with sadness but was devoid of any emotion". How can her eyes have sadness but at the same time not have any emotion? I would go back and fix this, because the first chapter is what draws people in, if there are tons of mistakes then they won't bother reading the rest.
EndlessChains chapter 28 . 1/27/2018
A well done chapter. The Ring Battles continues and it was quite interesting to read how Tsuna was involved in all of them up to their conclusion. It was amusing to read how she was able to trick many of them as well as confuse them with her other persona Sora. Quite interesting to read about Ieyasu and his feelings towards his sister. Nicely done with describing how the battles took place as well as all the events that happened in between. The conclusion to the chapter was nicely done as it opened up that Bermuda might learn the truth a bit as Reborn conintues to find answers. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
D C JoKeR H S chapter 28 . 1/25/2018
YAS! I LOVE THIS!
Whelp! Off to the second {Book}! w
SakuraKoi chapter 28 . 1/25/2018
so good
Bell2629 chapter 27 . 1/23/2018
OMG! Ginger is back! also squalo... you're not the only one wondering who tsuna will end up with :D he's like a teenage girl in this chapter and it was great. wonder how her fight with Hibari is gonna go since she replaced the mosca...
Nadeshiko666 chapter 27 . 12/27/2017
Yeah! Gingerbread! I love you! •
verysadtimes chapter 27 . 12/25/2017
You should give yourself more credit, this story is really entertaining and has some interesting development for all the characters involved :) sure, there are some typos and grammar mistakes here and there, but with chapters this size it's not that unusual. Anyways, looking forward to more, and in regards to the romance aspect, I don't know what your plans are but I'll be silently rooting for X27. On that note, Squalo acting like a teenage girl in this chapter was worth gold xD
FANactic Writer chapter 27 . 12/10/2017
Gingerbread is back!
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