O_O He accidentally burned a dude! The poor guy was just trying to wake him up... It seems like Hans has pretty good control of his powers though, from the way he helped heal the damage from it.

His meeting with Anna was pretty funny. She's such a spaz. XD

Ooh, he noticed Elsa was nervous about having her gloves off... does he suspect that she might also have powers?

Alright, I haven't actually seen Frozen, but I do have some basic knowledge of it, unlike a lot of things of yours that I'd be reading entirely fandom-blind...

Hans's parents seem a little bit like jerks with the way they were talking about/to him.

The servants forget he's a prince? Does he not act very princely most of the time, or something? Or he just has so many brothers that they lose track of who is one? XD

Hans seems like a pretty lonely guy who is looking forward to having some adventures out in the world. Or maybe he really hates his home seeing as how he's so determined not to come back that he already decided he's going to marry one of the princesses that he's never even met before just so he doesn't have to come back home after Elsa's coronation...

I would like to read more of it! It is quite interesting! Please update soon!

Oh, this is an AU? I missed the tag in your description. Fire and ice, the perfect match, yes? I'm very interested, now, to see how this'll change the story and the prince's motivations.

I like the opening of this chapter. Very reminiscent of Elsa. Powers he can't quite control, though he seems to have a better handle on them than Elsa, for the time being anyway.

Hans meets Anna! I really enjoy reading this from his point of view, since the movie makes everything seem a part of his evil master plan. I like that it's just accident here, perhaps fate even, that they should meet and how he's even upset with himself for it. This more human side of Hans makes him a lot more likable than the movie, where he's painted, with very broad strokes might I add, as simply a villain.

[And he had struck her with his horse] - This made me laugh! What a realization. Oh, but what princess doesn't want to be bowled over by a horse being ridden by a charming prince. xD Talk about first impressions.

Very nice little throw-in that he noticed her hands shaking. :) I figure most would pass it off to her nerves about the coronation, but I like that he picked up on it. This is a really cute chapter!

SPaG:
[and a a few] - Repeated a word here.
[both were more sitting in the boat] - This sentence doesn't make sense to me. I'm not sure what 'more sitting' is supposed to mean.
[for the second time now."] - Spare quotes here.

I am here to check out your other fandoms! And Frozen I know a thing or two about. :) Also, I didn't like Hans, so I'm kind of interested to see his perspective on things.

Hans has powers? I guess this is an AU, then. That sounds interesting (and makes sense why he's paired with Elsa). I can't wait to see what they are!

[Even though he was royalty, he hadn't ever really felt like it.] - I like this line and this characterization of Hans. It sounds like the Hans we know from the movie, and it also makes me feel bad for him, being so overlooked. I can imagine having 12 brothers is hard, so it's kind of nice that he's not just "the villain" but that we get a glimpse at the man and the motives.

Oh, there come his motives! I like your reasoning and how he drew the conclusion that he must marry one of the sisters!

This was a really cute first chapter. I hope you continue the story and can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

SPaG:
[He hadn't been] - Should be hasn't.
[The captian] - captain

I love this so far! Hopefully Hans and Elsa will meet soon!

Nice nice, i like it so far!
Keep going!