Loved it! Kinda sad it was only one chapter.

this was really well written. I love it!

Great extra scene

I liked your story. And you are right, trauma caused by blunt force can cause even more damage than a fast bullet going through the tissues. And a bullet on a vest at close range really qualify for that! (still, better to wear the bullet-proof vest and avoid major damage to the heart and blood vessels)
Even if the ribs are not broken, sure he will have lovely lung contusions and focal bleeding in that area (not necessarily coming out in spit, though)

Thanks for posting this story, and for the effort on research. ;)

Very nice!

Enjoyed your short story. Glad to find a nice one for the A-team! Great job :-)

I really liked this! Thanks for writing and sharing!

Nicely done. This was an enjoyable add on to this episode.

Good I like it so far

Hope thee will be more

The team needs to get the guy that shot Face and we need to read about his recovery

Thank you so much for taking the time to try and research the medical. it is clear you care so much about what you put in this story. I also look forward to reading more about this story.

I love face stories. Especially face and tawnia stories. Which I do not find hardly at all :(:(

I liked it! Well written, in character, and well done! A nice continuation of the scene!

I'm excited about this story! Could you please continue? And soon, too? :)

I'd give you a lollipop for this one. Nicely done.

I love this. I have always felt this scene needed more than the writers gave it. The shot and fall from the window should have caused more damage. Thank you for writing this.