| Reviews for A Gift of Fire |
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Bingotm chapter 6 . 4/15 I can’t help but smile while reading this |
FandomGee chapter 31 . 9/18/2019 I really enjoyed this story. I thought I had read it before but they seemed to be quite a few changes or even some additions. I really enjoy your writing about my 2 favorite characters. I look forward to any updates to your stories that follow this one. |
Guest chapter 21 . 11/2/2018 Add some more romance (kissing, surprisingly bold words, maybe some "very close" touching and kissing, etc.) |
Nenithiel chapter 31 . 10/25/2018 Getting caught up with all my fanfic reading. Nice little summary chapter to tie up the story. And a lovely blessing for the happy couple. |
Pippin chapter 1 . 8/4/2017 Well this is a depressing chapter, isn't it? I hope that Taurile's perayer work and I hope that she is okay she did have a very nasty fall that really could have killed her so happy it didn't. |
Rainbow Raven chapter 5 . 6/3/2017 Well lm glad that Kili is feeling better and that the majority of the dwarfs are if not happy okay with Taurile and Kili's relationship, Im pretty sure that all of the dwarfs that accompanied Thorin or more the okay with it seeming how happy she makes Kiliand them being close to him in many was what that for him not to machine that they know how much she hadbeen and is helping Kili. I think it's the older dwarfs and those who are who remember the time they really needed the elves help the elves trun away and left. Question were is Bilbo Baggins? He has to be ok right... for you wold have manche if he wasn't be for now right? Any hope he ok. |
Rainbow Raven chapter 4 . 6/1/2017 I dont like to be acopycat butb cant help it Fiki just said what I was thinking so I say I agree with Fiki on this chaper review, she my friend I know he for a long timeher jame is really Fiki (obviously) but she wish it was or eather Fili, Kili, or Pippin. any Ill add this glad that Taurile sad what she wanted to say to Kili and sweet chapter. |
Rainbow Raven chapter 3 . 5/28/2017 I knew it had to take a lot of power to heal Kili seeming how he was nearly dead. I'm glad that Taurile just had Legals believe her to be dead at frist instead of actually truly being dead. So Kili was right Taurile did know what Amrâlime means. I like the world Amrâlime its very pretty word I think I like it better thenthe elfin word Meleth nîn and I LOVE the elfin that Taurile doesn't get scared or embarrassed or whatnot when she see's Kili and doesn't tell him that she loves him too. She nearly lost her chance wheen Kili was nearly gone along the living. Im glad that she get a chance to say to Kili what she so nearly didn't get to say. Poor Legolas he truly loves Taurile and he knows that she doesn't feel the some way but she has those fellings for another and he a dwaf, so far Legals has been very good so about this and has not been an arrogant ass hope he stays that way. He probablly see that Kili cares for her too as much as she for him. I gald that Thranduil seen that he was worng aabout Taurile fellings for Kili and Kili fellings for her he was being an git then and a BIG one at that. |
Rainbow Raven chapter 2 . 5/25/2017 Oh Happy Day Kili lives that is Wounderful I was afraid that Fili was going to be along the deadnI feel so sorry fir him not only has he lost a bother but he has lost his best friend too, You haven't manche Thorin... so is that good or bad? Is ye alive or dead? Im fearing that his fate is the shame as poor Fili's which ifbit is the case sked me all the more sorry for Kili for with loseing Thorin he lost a uncle as well as a fathernlike figure. Theres no doubt that the lost of Fili and Thorin will pain Kili deeply but Filis death would be quite a bite more painful the Thorin's. When I think of Kili's and Fili's relationship I think of two of friendship and there are Marry snd Pippin, and Fred and George especially Fred and George for they are bothers as well. I hope that Taurile is not to bad of shape goodness know what ever she did to revive Kili had to take a lot of power. |
Rainbow Raven chapter 1 . 5/25/2017 Oh dear oh dear oh dear this is not good no not good at all. Or is it? Does this mean that there is a possibility that Kili just might bee alive, oh I hope so I really really do. How about Fili and Thorin are they along the living or ar they (like in the books and movies) along the died I hope (for Kili (if he lives that is) sake and my own that they are along the living. Very nice so far although it bee nice if you didn't live us on a cliffhanger. |
Fiki chapter 31 . 11/14/2016 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I DONT WHAT IT TO END. I DONT, I DON'T, I DON'T, I DON'T. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABOO IT REALLY OVER SO VERY VERY VERY SAD ME CRY! Okay I dune and maybe I over did it, I've been known to do that anyway now that I'm done with that here's my review... Such a beautiful ending for such a wonderfu,l beautiful, amazing, and truly VERY WELL written story. I was right I did hear wedding bells for Frey and Ori. Very happy that Ori lesson to his friends and family patient encouragement had finally courted Frey. I absolutely patativly LOVE the names of the three children especially Fil fori it's a very beautiful way of honor Kili's bother. I can olney imagine all the trouble the tree can cause. If you did not get the hint before I really started my review I'm sad to see this story end. Loved it very much thanks for sharing it. I wI'll most definitely read this one again. |
Fiki chapter 30 . 11/13/2016 Loved the wedding ceremony it like the Elven wedding in the chapter it was sweet, elegant, and FUN. Loved that her and Kili's family are getting to know and understand one another ways. It very nice to see that Dis and Tauriel's grandmother are becoming close. As I was reading Tauriel's and Fay's conversion I was hoping Fay was talking about Ori being the right guy and he is (do I here wedding bells) love it. HA Silwen won the franking contest against Thorin, yea you go girly. I think my favorite part of this chapter is how Kili and Tauriel mad the wedding ring and the meaning behind them it was... I... well...I don't know how to describe it but I Love it I really really do. |
Guest chapter 29 . 11/13/2016 Oh, so that what happening to Taurile?... Well it's only fair, right? I mean just think about what Kili went through. Kili has (the poor dwarf) been tease and...well tortured ha ha ha ha (sorry Kili) So it is only fair that she is tea service and little by her mother. I was right Taurile's mom and grandma did a beautiful job with the dress. Very nice wedding party it was sweet, elected, and fun. Love this right here is sooo funny, "You live in a tree!" "Where else would I live" "Um, a fairy palace in clouds and moonlight" (that the funnest part) |
Fiki chapter 28 . 11/12/2016 Very VERY HAPPY that Kili's and Tauriel's family'sare getting along and being marry with each other, I like this party ut sound like a lot of fun, loved how there us both dwarfish and elvish music very very very nice HAPPY! Like Kili's and Tauriel's moment alone it was very sweet, love Tauriel crown the way you decide it it seems beautiful. Awww Kili got a cuddle party with out even knowing it how sweet. Or was it not a cuddle party at all? Meaning did Dwalin, Ori, and Thorin sleep with Kili so they would know when he got up, so you know that could...hum...well... hum torture him? I know I shouldn't lough I really really shouldn't...but...I...I...Well I just can't help it so (so sorry Kili) hahaha haha hahaha haha haha haha haha he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he funny okay I'm dune (again sorry Kili). I have no doubt that Kili will be true to his word by gaving back what he was received (nope not at all) what you have Kili in sounds very nice. I Wounder, how Tauriel is doing? |
Fiki chapter 27 . 11/11/2016 Very happy to know that Kili is ajusting even more in to being king. Like that he is not always missing Tauriel for that would be muder. It's bad enough that he misses her every night, So it good that he has all the inporten Kingly dudes and his wood and family in the (safly) seem to be harder for Tauriel I blame quite a bit of that on Legolas (sorry but I do) I so very much wish that their last talk could have been a happer one for both of their sakes as well as Kili's. Mommy and grandmommy art making the dress so very much what to know what it looks like , whatever it looks like I'm sure it must be beautiful. |