ARGH! That Gastonberry (Gooseberry) I wanted to punch him in the face! Poor Pipkin, glad he was taken care of his wound from that Gastonberry. Excellent Chapter, Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Chapter 4 introduces us to the biggest rabbit jerk ever, Gooseberry. He's even nastier than I remembered him to be, unless he got worse with the rewrite. You do a good job at portraying his rudeness towards Leo and Fiver. When Hazel calls a meeting to welcome Leo back to the warren, he takes over to stroke his own inflated ego. At least nobody believes him.

Chapter 5 has a cute beginning. Fiver wants a mate but is worried that nobody would want him, but Leo is easily able to make him realize the truth. But the sweet stuff is short-lived, as Gooseberry soon returns, wishing for Fiver to die and bluntly telling Leo to go die in the woods. Fiver's stubborn refusal to tell Hazel about this (indirectly forcing Leo to do the same) makes things difficult...

The last part of the chapter is cute though. Blackberry remains awesome, and her kittens were funny. Leo sharing a burrow with Fiver and Silverweed was cute.

Overall, two great chapters. I hope to keep reading soon.

Excellent Chapter! I love the ending of this chapter. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Awesome Chapter! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! Interesting to see Cornstalk made an surprise return.

Excellent Chapter! Poor Leo, glad the Owsla were siding with Leo after Gastonberry's (Gooseberry) accusation. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Excellent Chapter! I think Leo might be experiencing the same thing how Fiver heard Hazel calling for him.

Finally getting back to this, after way too long...I made it up to chapter 3; the two I read were great.

Chapter 2 does a good job at portraying aunt Madeline as a jerk, with obvious favouritism for Jason. She takes every opportunity to praise him, and insults Leo every other sentence. It got really disturbing when Jason said that Blackberry was...a child molester...eek...this is really nasty, even by Jason’s standards...

The second part of the chapter, as Leo escapes to avoid being sent to prison again, was great. It was very dramatic and well-written. Another good part of the chapter was when Leo wrote “to” the Watershippers.

Chapter 3 brings back the soft and cute stuff, as Leo reunites with the Watershippers. The highlights were probably when he met Fiver and Hazel again, and let’s not forget the amazing Blackberry. The introduction of her kittens, Raspberry and Roseberry, was handled well, and it is interesting how they have the same names Leo predicted in the previous chapter. Leo’s conversation with Fiver, Pipkin and Silverweed at the end was also great.

Near the end of the chapter, we meet another OC, Bluebell, who is unrelated to the other Blackberry's kissing boyfriend. If I remember the original version correctly, she had a limited role (not sure if you’ll be expanding it) and ended up in a romance with Dandelion (I assume that will remain). I like her portrayal in this chapter.

I hope to keep reading soon.

Excellent Chapter! Hawkbit and Dandelion are the Duo Comedic Rabbits alright! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Excellent and Hilarious Chapter of Dandelion and Bluebell in their cute moments! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Awesome Chapter! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Excellent Chapter! That was a surprise that it wasn't Jason! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Excellent Chapter! Interesting rescue and wonder who the voice is... Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Outstanding Chapter! I laughed on what happened to Gooseberry. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Excellent Chapter and Very Interesting especially in the end of the chapter! And now his Aunt Madeline in his dreams. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Excellent Chapter! Just made my day! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!