nice story looking forward to reading the sequels

lol damn, guest reviewer is right. my numbers are wayyy off on this. I will revisit and recheck it later. until then thanks for reading and bearing with me.

I don't mean to be a party pooper but you'll have to recheck your Gibbs Ex-Wife History book again. Diane was first after Shannon. Then Rebecca and then Stephanie. But other than that, great story! Also, it was kinda difficult to understand after jumping from scene to scene to scene. Still, a lot better than most of the stories I have read on here.

I like the story, I'm just not a fan of Tony flat out calling Gibbs, "Dad"
It doesn't really make sense to me that Gibbs is Tony's adoptive father since he's an adult and Senior is still around
I'm trying not to be over critical, I just prefer Tony/Gibbs father/son stories to be a certain way. What I'm trying to say is, the story is a little confusing at some parts (particularly the relationship Tony has with Gibbs' wives), it's not the type of story I would write, but you're not me. It's a good story!

Wow wow wow I loved this

So many things in this story that could lead off into other stories :)

Great take on this episode. I love father/son stories. I know you said this is a one-shot, but I hope someday you will post more of the back story. Thank you for posting this piece.

Great story

Wow Gibbs is Tonys adoptive dad. Love him and Shannon adopting Tony.

I agree I wouls love to read how he got adopted.

Terrific! You did a great job on this. Would love to read a story about how Gibbs and Shannon adopted Tony.

I love that Gibbs adopted Tony

love the angst suspense & danger
fantastic

GREAT STORY!

Thank you G.