You know, it's something I could see happen if Optimus ever just decided to relax for once, and it's really heartwarming to see it even happen.

Wow! This story is sooooooooooooooo amazing. I like how the children: Jack, Miko & Rafael get to spend some time with Optimus Prime. Its amazing & its so cute. I love it. Wish they could spend more time with Optimus Prime more often, that will be amazing, so they could get to know Optimus Prime a lot more.

Please keep up the good work, I hope you will update soon.

Thanks,

ChelleNorlund

That was sooo sweet!

This was a lovely story!

This was beautiful! (And too short, so don't hesitate in writing more )

So sweet :) I love human-bot bonding moments.

This is beautiful!

I've always thought that Optimus should have gotten some one-on-one time with the kids, and this really seems like something they'd do.
Yeah...Orion was a sarcastic kid sometimes, wasn't he? It's been a while since I read the book, but I remember him mouthing off to Megatron's Decepticon buddies and Megatron having to prevent fights from breaking out as a result.

Grate story I think its sweet that you read it to your Grandmother. I've lost relatives and know how hard it is. But I'm happy that their in haven and know that their happy but it doesn't make me miss them any less but I know I'll see them again someday.

Wonderfully written. It's a shame that Optimus never bonded with the children or spends some time with them in the series. This story makes up for it.

i really liked it.

HI

I LIKED IT.

I am so sorry it is complete.

THANKS AND BYE

Very cute.

Very delightful. One other thing the kids could have reminded Prime about: had there been no Orion Pax, there never would have been an Optimus Prime. Pax is the foundation, the source of Primes thoughts, opinions. Prime would never be strong if all he counted on was brute strength. This was very insightful.

It was so...sweet! I loved it!