first of all sis i have an actual account but i'm a lazy bish and dont sign in on my laptop, second you shouldnt be calling your devoted readers crazy or be mad at them for being passionate about your writing and the direction of the story, its your fault if anything for being such a damn good writer :)

Oh great a cliffhanger. Can you please update this. Will Ezra, kallus and velen talk about what’s going on

It's a wonderful story I absolutely loving it

10/10 I really do enjoy reading this story it’s great.

Still somewhat into this story but not sure how much anymore p, good chapter anyways

SUCH A GOOD UPDATE IM SO GLAD I CHECKED IN ON THIS OMG I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS SINCE LIKE 2014 AND I WAS BROWSING THROUGH AND SEEING THAT THIS UPDATED MADE MY DAY ASHJFKLSDJG THANK U

Dude this was such a good chapter seeing this in my inbox made me deliriously happy legit i loved this so much keep writing! I've read a TON of your stories and they're all so so good fr 100/10

What can I tell you ... I love this story and I thought it was forgotten, but it has come back from the hiatus.

Felicity was not dead, she was out Partying ;)

It was very fun to have them all gathered there trying to save Ezra ... to then chat and forget that they were trapped there.

I never really liked the ideas about gangs (It will be that where I live there is a similar situation only that we know them as "narcos")

You know? I have never noticed Alton Castle ... until now it seemed unknown to me ... but here you make it look like a very nice idiot (And it looks good with Ezra ... the question I have is If you join the harem)

This already seems DxD (Not that I complain your fanfic is a thousand times better than that series)

The boys sense a new rival for the love of their favorite girl and I wonder how they will adapt to the change and if they will make the poor boy rude.

I imagine him as the intermediary when Kallus and Valen begin to fight, preventing both from hitting and being the voice of reason.

Because of its lively character, I think it would be someone who would organize parties or activities to get to know each other better (Like the teachers at primary School XD)

And in the end ... the boys would end up resigned and taking appreciation, (they would adopt him as the mascot, from time to time Valen would take him to fly to be distracted or Kallus participate with reticiency in some activity but when the word anime is mentioned drag poor Alton to the nearest convention)

What are my delusions?

You are Fujoshi ... Nya you are from my team, I admire you I am your female fan ... (By the way your real name is the cutest in the universe )

Hey ... I could tell you by PM some ideas that I have ... (She prepares not to lynch her and give her deserved vergazos to the Chiara)

I like this fanfic;)

Cool chapter continue please.

Awesome chapter
Love it

¡Vendedora de caricias ayudame a olvidarla que esta noche estoy muy solo y no me quiero suicidaaaar!

When sing this in the bar and all the people look : WTF Really?

I love this OTP...your fic is Awesome...
I read the 10 chapters in phantom mode But it's an adiction
Descontrol Everywere ;)

Update please I love this story on this and AO3

I love this story here and of course AO3 as well, please continue I love this a lot

Dear Felicity Dream.

Oh. My. Freaking. God. This fanfic was AWESOME! Let me start off by listing my top 3 favourite things in this fanfic:

1: Ezra as a girl in this version of canon, works surprisingly well, because most fanfics that have genderbent Ezra...just tell the same story, but with fem!Ezra in it. This Ezra is smart, sassy, funny, kind, but is still a bit rough around the edges, which is understandable, since she's lost her parents and is an unwilling sex slave. Poor girl, hope her life gets better...

2: Zeb has a more friendly relationship with Ezra in this version, which I really like! Don't get me wrong, Zeb and Ezra have a good bromace in canon, but I really hated the scene in "Spark Of Rebellion" where Zeb selfishly left him behind! He didn't even TRY to help him out! I get that he thought that Ezra was a liability to him and a bit annoying at the times, but that still doesn't justify his douchebaggery! Back on track, I like how Zeb empathises with Ezra and genuinely wants her to be happy, so I hope their friendship will continue to grow. As for the airlock scene, I liked how Zeb showed concern for Ezra and she yelled at him to get away, which I thought was sweet and a bit sad, but I also liked how he perked up and enthusiastically agreed that they should rescue Ezra later in the Ghost! So adorable! :)

3: OK everyone, get you hate mail out: I don't like Agent Kallus, at least in canon. (Cue audiences booing.) What?! I'm sorry, I just don't like him! Do I hate him? Well...no, but to me, he's just your typical moustache-twirling bad guy and in "The Honourable Ones" his sympathetic moments felt OOC and very rushed. However, I really like your version of him, where, instead of being a one-dimensional jerk, he's a honest, kind man who just happens to be on the wrong side of the tracks and his cold facade is just a mask to wear, in order to cope with the more..."dark" side of his job. I hope he gets to make up to Ezra in some way and I think this will come into conflict with Zeb.

Speaking of Zeb, I have an idea for "Droids In Distress", take both that, mesh "Fighter Flight" into one episode and here is my story for Zeb, Kallus and Ezra:

Zeb and Ezra are messing around with Chopper, which annoys Hera so much, that she ditches them onto Kashyyk, with only Sabine to keep an eye on them, claiming it's a "Cultural experience." After some miscommunication shenanigans with the Wookies, the trio find out that Stormtroopers steal the Wookie children in the night and take them to a factory, deep in the woods. So Ezra, Zeb, Sabine and a small squad of warriors and they brave the many dangers of the woods, including monsters, man-eating plants and quicksand.

They finally find the factory children being used as slaves, building weapons for the Empire and Zeb forms a plan: He will fight off the Stormtroopers, Sabine and the squad rescue the kids and Ezra has to find the Emergency Shutdown button, which will stop the weapons from being built.

The plan goes well at first, but then Agent Kallus attacks Zeb, with a corrupt Bio-Rifle and this angers him, so Kallus reluctantly reveals that he was involved with the Seige Of Lasan, but before he can elaborate further, Zeb starts beating up Kallus, as Ezra tries to stop the fight. Meanwhile, Sabine inspects the weapons and realises that they are all Bio-Rifles, but perverted into far more lethal weapons called "Disruptors" and she sets off explosives in the factory, setting it ablaze, as she leads the Wookies outside.

As for Zeb, he has managed to corner Kallus and is ready to finish him off, but Ezra stops him, begging Zeb not to kill Kallus, but before she can say anymore, the flames reach some flammable liquid canisters and they create a massive explosion, however, Ezra's Force powers kick in and she creates a massive barrier around them, protecting them.

Zeb searches for a way out, when Kallus reveals that there is a TIE Fighter in the factory back door, so the three of them run there and they take off, before the place burns up. They all go back to the Wookie village, where both parents and children happily reunite, but Zeb seems unusually quiet, even when the Wookies have a feast in celebration, so Ezra confronts him about it and Zeb reveals that his home planet, Lasan, fell to the Empire because of the Disruptors, including his family, and his fellow Lasats are nearly extinct, with the few surviving ones fleeing to parts unknown.

After the feast, the Ghost finally arrives to pick them up, but Zeb insists that Kallus be left behind to the Wookies and throws him off the ship. Zeb then goes into his room and looks at a picture of his family, but then Ezra and Chopper start chasing each other around again, with Zeb denying his grief and joining in with there antics...but he still feels the pain of losing his loved ones.

The End!

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this is awesome and i love it cant wait to see where you go from here