| Reviews for Green Eyes |
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Guest chapter 20 . 5/11 I'm reading this in 2020 and this is definatley going down as one of my favourite Japril fanfics. Thank You:))) |
Nannyjay chapter 20 . 9/3/2019 Well what can I say about this except that I enjoyed every page you told such a good story that you could just imagine japril like this if he wasn't a doctor of course . |
cendella chapter 1 . 8/11/2017 Dylan made this story for me. When he went to jump off the tree house, I couldn't stop laughing. Thank you for this. |
A ShrinkinG VIOLET GIrL chapter 20 . 4/4/2017 this is a beautiful story! |
Ma Lizz chapter 19 . 3/19/2017 PS: I would have loved to see more of Jacksons inner nerd showing. I really loved this side of his personality! Like I said, you didn't use all the potential that you could. Ma Lizz |
Ma Lizz chapter 20 . 3/19/2017 Hello :) I'm not sure if you will ever read this but I'd like to comment on your story. The main reason for doing this is to improve my English skills but of course because I really like your story. First of all I really liked the beginning in the classroom. It was a very interesting way to start. I thought it was a pitty that there wasn't much interaction like that afterwards. In my opinion Jackson's part in this story had way more potential than you used. But I liked it anyway. April in action was also very cool. I think it is great when there is actually a medical aspect in a greys fanfiction. That seems to be very rare. Oh and I really fell in love with the storyline from Jo. That was really great. The whole foster kid story worked very well and I think she was adorable as the babysitter. Her relationship with the teachers were quite special but I really loved it how they all took care. I also think that the kids were adorable. They behaved very authentic but I think Dylan was sometimes a bit over the top like the scene with the treehouse. I don't think that this was very realistic. Well despite all my criticism I really enjoyed reading your story! I still don't know how to end a review in Englisch, so I just say bye! Ma Lizz |
another.maggie chapter 20 . 2/25/2017 Although I'm a bit late to the party I've gotta say this: I loved this fanfiction. It is honestly one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've read so far, one of the best pieces of writing I read this year. I'm very glad I stumbled upon your account and I'm looking forward to everything you wrote / will write in the future. :) |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2017 Awww, so cute. :) They're adorable together. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2017 Oh, he's smitten by her. :) Lovely chapter! |
Guest chapter 20 . 12/3/2015 this story was so awesome. hope you will be back soon with another japril story |
1crightonly chapter 20 . 11/28/2015 I just finished the story and I loved it. I really loved how you wrote the ending by giving us a glimpse of how their lives turn out after they got married and added a new edition to the family |
GalanthaDreams chapter 20 . 11/25/2015 I loved it, I needed it, really. Shonda has been giving us big moments with them but they are all so damn heartbreaking-great acting though. Anyways, this was an incredibly sweet and well-written fic and I hope to see others from you. I also really appreciated the lack of drama, everyone was acting like an adult and it was a pleasure to see how the kids were the first priority. |
Nanard chapter 20 . 11/16/2015 Oh no it is the end I am so sad :(! But hopefully you'll come back with another amazing idea ;). This journey with April and Jackson was perfect so thanks for your time. |
Guest chapter 20 . 11/16/2015 Thank you for taking the time to write this story! First of all I love the ending that you gave Japril their family! and I also love that we got to have a little glimpse into Jo's plans for the future as well. Thanks again! :) |
NomadDreamer chapter 20 . 11/16/2015 Great end to a beautiful story. I don't usually read Japril unless there's Jolex in the mix but I can't resist your writing! Loved it! |