Reviews for For Charity
Hannah.H chapter 20 . 4/3
I absolutely adore this fic. I just reread it for the 3rd time. Still adore it. I for one love Harry and Severus' relationship, but I also love the added dynamic that Ettore brought to it. I would love to see a sequel, maybe a one shot, where they take Ettore up on his offer of an epic threesome. Like a wedding anniversary, or a gift for something. Anyways, I just wanted to say that your work is my absolute favorite.
sassykitten1701 chapter 20 . 2/9
Ok, I have to ask, or well, beg, ate you going to expand on draco and ettore?!
sassykitten1701 chapter 18 . 2/9
I'm still here and still living this!
MajaS chapter 12 . 3/17/2019
You’ll need to read the half-blood prince again about your apparition descriptions. It’s like being squeezed through a tube.. but I do like the stories you come up with
Guest chapter 20 . 1/14/2019
I loved every blasted second of this! I just need to know that Ettore and Draco lived happily ever after, as well.
mollypurkey chapter 20 . 1/6/2019
This was a wonderful story! I was so peeved with Ettore at first but I came around. I’m always so happy with a well done Harry/Snape story. Thank you!
RobinTheSlytherin chapter 20 . 11/27/2018
I'm so glad I found this fic! I didn't know I needed it in my life so badly, I love Ettore, and his relationships with Draco Harry and Severus. I loved your OC, and I want to read more about him! this was like HP meets Devil Wears Prada, meets Mission Impossible, meets erotc literature. I'M OBSESSED! I loved the art you added, so glad I spent the past 2 days binging on This! I love your writing and thank you for the fic!
Bele chapter 20 . 3/15/2018
loved it. very heavy. laughed out loud at Draco knowing how to crack a safe. hilarious. nagyon szépen köszönjük!
sweetwizard88 chapter 18 . 12/11/2017
Pff, thats there problem! I love ettore, but of course i love severus and harry more!
elenaportgas chapter 2 . 11/25/2017
hi, I'm a big fan of yours, I really enjoy reading your works.
I have just a small critique: the correct italian translation to the word "georgous" is delizioso, I know that because I am italian.
"sfarzoso" means "fancy" or "very elegant".
HoneyBear84 chapter 20 . 11/15/2017
Love it, but wish it had a bit of a longer epilogue
K-no-uta chapter 20 . 10/16/2017
Well, this one was a fanfiction of mixed feelings.

For one part I could have strangled Ettore (not really, ofcourse*lol*) and in the other hand I couldn't help being glad he was pushing at their backs. I must also mention I would not have minded a full-fleged threesome one-night-stand once we'd have an established Snarry. But it's OK the way it is.

This time it was readable that you struggled with the story a little. Must have been difficult to write and for that you did well. There were some difficulties with the language and there were parts were I got really confused about Severus saying "Potter" in really intimate moments.

What I liked about the storyline is how you showed us Italy with great ideas like magica clothing, magic detection alarms and malfunctioning apparation and hence car-transportation XD. on the other hand there were slight inconsistencies in character design. Especially Ettore turned out being very twisten, but then again maybe that was exactly what you were aiming for. The sex scenes were a little mixed this time, too. Some were wonderful and some were a little repetative within themselves.

However, I did enjoy myself and I personally am fully aware of how much it takes to write something really good. It didn't turn out perfect this time, but it certainly was good. :) So I'm still all in for your wonderful stories and ideas.
iLikeMostFood chapter 14 . 10/12/2017
Yaaaaassss, David Handy is bae
Guest chapter 20 . 7/15/2017
But what happened to him & Draco! Aggghhhh
Kris chapter 20 . 7/9/2017
Highly enjoyable!
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