I have a soft spot for Deamus, so I liked this. I also like Seamus with Lavender, so I liked the brief mention of that, too. I can only imagine how confusing it would be to love your best friend, and not knowing if he would love you too. Especially with Dean going on and on about Ginny. And of course, after the war, more people suddenly came to terms with their unconfessed love.

Oh my god, this nearly had me crying. Poor Remus, I feel so sorry for him! Left by everyone, not even deemed trustworthy enough to be Secret Keeper. I can so imagine him being angry at Dumbledore. The part about them being afraid Peter couldn't have hold it if he was made Secret Keeper was aching, because of, you know, what happened.

I'm a bit confused as to what time Sirius came from, since if it's after his break out of Azkaban then he's on the run and wouldn't be allowed to partake in such an important experiment, and also he wouldn't say that Voldemort was defeated once and for all. If it's earlier, it must have been within two weeks of James and Lily dying (because he was imprisoned shortly after Peter's betrayal) so what's the point in going back one week if that's the case?
I do like the fact he decides to speak to Regulus, despite the fact that he knows he shouldn't. We can only hope that Regulus listens.

Ah it's quite sweet that Cho comforts Luna. Poor Luna. The scene at the beginning with Millie was a quiet start, I can imagine that in times of war, those peaceful moments were a rarity. The kiss / Luna's question came rather sudden, I missed a bit of build up towards it.

Now here's a pairing I never even considered. I can definitely see Severus as being the type to dislike pda, and Pomona always was rather cheery, so I can see that too. I'm not sure if it's actually a parallel universe if you change only little things, but then again, I'm not that good on parallel universes.

Interesting AU. I think the Mental Hospital!AU theme works well with Bellatrix. I do feel that she's a bit too cheery in comparaison to her usual self, and I was confused about Rabastan's role. At first I thought he was just a visitor, but then it turned out he was the doctor? I do like the idea of Bellatrix having 'delusions' about the wizarding world.

Ah yes, that does exactly sound like Gilderoy Lockheart. I would have liked it if you would had expanded upon this a bit more, but it was an amusing read nonetheless.

Winky is such a sweatheart, an apple pie is just what Harry needs in a time like that. Though I'm a bit surprised Harry even has a house elf (I'm sure Hermione would not be too happy with that).

It's a bit of a surprise that Bellatrix would be disdainful of her newborn sister and Andromeda would be so awed, considering how things went in canon. But then again, Bella had already done the 'big sister part' whereas for Andy this was all new, she was always the little sister, and now she was a big sister as well.

Oh my, that was a really sad way to start off your collection. :(
Poor Hugo, and poor Hermione and Ron and Rose of course. You're right, no one should have to bury their own child.

loved it thank you

I really love your portrayal of Bellatrix in this, and how Rabastan is there for her, even when Rodolphus wasn't.

I liked this! I always thought that insults bothered Luna more than we saw. I thought that she and Cho would have been really good friends (though in this fic they become something more). Great job!

This was definitely a treat. I've never read a MentalHospital!AU before and even better it featured my favourite character. I like how cheery she was in the beginning of the fic. I also like that though Rodolphus may not want anything to do with his crazy wife, his brother still comes to visit her. It's sad however that the wonderful world of magic is all in Bella's mind. She still keeps her obsession with her Lord and her thirst for power, which is nice (and shows it's a deep part of her personality). Great job.

When did Winky get attached to Harry? I don't remember her ever liking him at all. He was certainly never her master.