Reviews for The Legend of Zelda: The World at War
Queen Emily the Diligent chapter 60 . 6/11/2019
This was excellent! Wow! I have spent the past two weeks reading this and have enjoyed every second. To favorites it goes! I wish it had a hard copy for it would go on my shelf! Looking forward to the prequel! Beautiful job!
AzHasANewName1 chapter 57 . 5/14/2019
Oh, you totally used Thor's entrance in Infinity War xD
LoruleanHeart chapter 60 . 1/15/2019
What an ending! This is quite the fanfic.

The "Link, Yes." line from Gavan made me smile. And it looks like he did ultimately get executed for his villainy.

So many little details that inspire me in your writing. One of the things I love about fanfiction is seeing everyone's interpretations and characterizations, and your's really shines through here. This isn't a bland fanfic at all. It's very colorful in it's character interactions!

Loved seeing the main three team up to fight Majora. And loved the detail about how the moon is no longer a grassy peaceful field, but now more of a horrific wasteland. Even Fi and Ghirahim worked together!

Excellent epilogue, wrapping everything up. I had to do a double take of the final few lines. Triplets! Oh My! I could kind of see where that was going with the reincarnations of the goddesses. It was a really sweet ending. I just pray for Zelda's poor uterus. lol

Congratulations on finishing your fanfic. I know it certainly feels like an achievement. And thanks for the shoutout!
Ultimate blazer chapter 60 . 1/15/2019
"One of the most epic Zelda's fic" -IGN
This story deserve to have more followers and favorites. Good luck with the next, you have gained a new follower.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2019
Maan, you did a great job with the fight. I hope it just keeps on getting better :). Congrats!
LoruleanHeart chapter 59 . 12/8/2018
Finally got my laptop working again. Let's see how long this lasts... It's on it's last legs.

Things are escalating again, storywise. These guys never catch a break. I thoroughly loved the scenes with Ganondorf and Ghirahim interacting. To see Ghirahim hesitant to follow him now that he is free of Demise, but ultimately Ganondorf convinces Ghirahim to fight with him. Also liked Ganondorf's explaination/speach to Rickard Gavan. I really enjoy how you write all the characters!
LoruleanHeart chapter 58 . 10/14/2018
What a battle! I'm certainly no stranger to Ganondorf, but dang he was brutal here when he betrayed Semira, at least until he rid himself of the demon king. I wonder what will become of him now or if we'll hear from him again.

And what an ending to the chapter. Poor Mask Salesman...

Ooo, I also guessed that it was a stroke correctly. Naora quite literally gave her mother a stroke!
Ultimate blazer chapter 58 . 10/13/2018
What a final battle! Blood, death and very epic fights everywhere! And the best part? Link and Ganondorf as allies! I always wanted to see them as allies.
Nice chapter !
Nayru's Wishes chapter 5 . 8/27/2018
I'm really enjoying what I am reading as of now of this tale you have here. Its been a while since a fan story caught my interest, so its your lucky day to know that this Fanfiction has me hooked! It'll take a while to catch to the current chapters, but that's more fun on my part. You have my full support. :)
LoruleanHeart chapter 57 . 7/30/2018
Enjoyed the intro with Ikana. I loved the references to the gibdo puzzle in the well. It's fun to imagine what Ikana would be like if it weren't a wasteland, and what it's people would be like if they were alive again, and I think you wrote it perfectly!

Link meeting with the Hero of Time and reassuring him that he will be able to defeat Ganondorf kind of makes me a little sad (in a good way.) It makes me think of the hero defeated timeline.

Semira must be terrifying if even Rickard Gavan (usually a badass) is so unnerved by her!

I'm wondering how Shilara will use her second chance at life.

And... What a way to end the chapter! I look forward to reading the outcome of all this!

The character development in this fanfic is superb. The characters change and develop so much during this story.

Where does your inspiration and longwindedness come from? And where can I get some? XD I'm so envious. I'll continue to read your Legend of Zelda stories at they come!
Ultimate blazer chapter 57 . 7/28/2018
Nice chapter! And yes, I want the prequel and the sequel!
LoruleanHeart chapter 56 . 6/6/2018
This is one of the best chapters yet! I really enjoyed the backstory with Lana, Cia, and Ikana. The lore of Ikana has always interested me and I like the way you portrayed it. It was really cool to read about all the Ikana characters when they were alive. And that scene where Gomess summons Majora was awesome. A nice take on how they might have lost their lives.

Oh dear, looks like Kali is going to extreme measures. I can only imagine how badly it will reflect on her when she’s found out. I get that she wants to make things right and take Ganondorf down, but damn... I can’t wait to see how this turns out.

The “he’s crazier than Ghirahim” line. XD

It’s funny you mention Hyrule: Total War, because that’s what this fanfic reminds me of and I’ve neglected to mention.

Looking forward to how the Hero or Time will tie into things!
Ultimate blazer chapter 56 . 6/1/2018
So...now Ganondorf is Semira's bit**...Lol, that is a good twist. Cia's past was interesting and at last the good guys have a plan. The end of the chapter was...weird in a good sense.
I can't to read the final chapters! :)
LoruleanHeart chapter 55 . 4/12/2018
A very revealing conversation between Din and Naora. Quite a shock to learn that she gave Ganondorf the Triforce of power and (not so shocking) now regrets it.

Very much enjoying all the relationships and drama this fic has to offer.

Link becomes the Fierce Diety again. I can really feel the emotion in this scene! A rare (but welcome) bittersweet moment to the story. I can't wait to see what Link's ultimate fate is along with the relationship between him and Zelda.

Damn, Erris is brutal. :O The whole interaction between him and his uncle was very satisfying. Loved the dialogue. I could really 'hear' it all in my head.
LoruleanHeart chapter 54 . 4/12/2018
Oh no! I somehow managed to miss a whole chapter. I apologize. I've been a little scatterbrained the past year or so since my son was born, and despite my efforts to remain organized, things sometimes fall by the wayside on accident.

At last, Thrakon and his mother are reunited, even if not under the best circumstances. And I do enjoy a look into Hyrule's version of an afterlife. It's not something discussed a lot in canon, so it's up to us fans to kind of guess at what there may be.

And oh man. Ghirahim sure seems excited to see Zelda... and then she just turned him back into a sword. Welp, you tried Ghirahim, you tried. The scene with the villains and the royal family fighting and then Semira taking over Zelda's body is very well written scene. I'm very impressed. Very cinematic and clever, I could picture it quite easily!

Enjoyed the dialogue in this chapter. It flows really nicely.

OMG, Link's got a gun! :O

Link! You can't just go around telling people they look like Kanthos. That's rude! XD

Thank you for continuing to update this story. I can tell you've put so much effort into it! I'll get to Chapter 55 shortly.
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