Hey there!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY I HOPE YOU HAD A WONDERFUL, AWESOME, AMAZING DAY!
Ok... I have finished my happy birthdays. Sorry, I was meaning to get to you earlier but I had, you know, life.
Anyway, this is one of the most adorable Fremione stories I have ever read! It's adorable!
I found hardly any grammar mistakes, and I'm a qualified grammar critic! Ahem, not really, cough cough.
Actually I really, really like this story and I think I have just found myself a new favourite. I love how Fred is so nervous, it's adorable.
I want to congratulate you on this masterpiece, well done!

Dearest obsessedteenagefangirl,
AW!
I really like this story! I like it that you paired Fred and Hermione together!
Oh! and...
'Happy birthday to you!
Happy birthday to you!
Happy birthday dearest obsessedteenagefangirl!
Happy birthday to you!'

D'awww, that was really cute :)

Oh Freddie, I thought you were a Gryffindor! Haha, funny! Great job!
*Hayles

Cute!