| Reviews for Spiral |
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   Lestat74 chapter 4 . 1/17 I’ve read your story two times so far and let me tell you is one of my favorite ones! Great job! You filled in the two weeks gap the episode left very well. You nailed it! |
| FireFlower88 chapter 4 . 6/11/2017 LOVED the ending! I really love how you included the numbers of time in the beginning and the end, but especially the final line. I'd kind of always wondered about the unseen parts of this episode. Thanks for filling it in! |
| swifters chapter 4 . 1/17/2017 Lovely writing. I especially liked the line about Callen fighting like some people play chess. Clever! Thank you for this :) |
| Dramamama5 chapter 4 . 4/8/2016 Very good... love the friendship these two share... |
| I Feel Possessed chapter 4 . 2/19/2016 Excellent story, so glad I found it. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/5/2016 Beautiful writing! One note: Callen is Romani, which is a group of people originally from India who spread all over Europe and speak the "Romani" language (some people call them the Gypsies), but the language that you've translated him speaking in this chapter is called "Romanian," which is spoken in the country of Romania and not actually the same thing. It's confusing, but at least you tried! I'm loving the suspense in the story, keep up the good work! |
| knirbenrots chapter 4 . 12/20/2015 Loved this storyline, giving us a glimpse of what Callen has gone through during his life. Thank you for writing this story! |
| knirbenrots chapter 3 . 12/20/2015 Poor Callen... And Sam, who is hardly able to help him... |
| knirbenrots chapter 2 . 12/20/2015 You're so great in writing sam's thoughts in here. I literally can feel him think... Well done! |
| knirbenrots chapter 1 . 12/20/2015 Such a great start to this story. How come I never read this before?! |
| wotumba1 chapter 4 . 10/1/2015 great Story, love the figures and numbers throughout it |
| M14Mouse chapter 4 . 3/3/2015 This fic was totally awesome. Much better than mine when I did a tag for the episode. this fic is wonderful. The friendship and the depth of friendship between the two. Great job! |
| LaDamita chapter 4 . 2/15/2015 Always good to see the bromance front and center. The countdown added just the right touch to every emotion Sam faced. |
| Hoosier65 chapter 4 . 2/14/2015 you never finished Catching fire or you left it in a strange place. |
| CallenFan chapter 4 . 2/14/2015 Awesome story, just wish this wasn't the end! Love how you detailed Sam's worry and concern for Callen, it's so touching! Personally, I think that the show could have expanded further on the Callen-Sam scene when Callen was in the hospital. It was such a beautiful bromance moment between the two. And I'm glad your story captured the essence of that moment. Keep writing more Callen-Sam h/c stories and I'll keep reading (and reviewing)! |
