i like this story after chapter 10.

I remember not getting very far in your fanfic. So this time I decided to start on chapter 4 with super vague memories of what could be your fanfics chapters. So, good, intertainning. I like it. Yeah, her progress in this chapter is fast haha, but as a reader reading this for fun(which is how I usually read fanfiction), I prefer it this way than having her be emotionless the rest of most the fanfic. I'm thinking this as a power boost, she was just grinding the whole time ya know? XD

I think I know why you lost your readers on second and third chapter. it's about the confession, because reality it will be super hard and awkward to confess that you're reincarnator. moreover so to your supposed dad, and poor him, the kid that kill his beloved wive was a stranger, not his. I don't said that it's bad, it's just not my plate, to confess before you strong enough.

Nice story :)

Brave and smart to not only compare to Canon but we'll known fanfic as well

Well done reunion

My personal opinion is that therapeutic interventions need to vary depending upon MANY variables including personality type, history of trauma, level of education, stage in recovery, responses to previous interventions, current mood, etc. Hikaru finally emotionally responding is potentially a good thing as it could allow for new catalysts for change/healing (or further withdrawal and loss of progress).

So timeline-wise the canon rookies are about to graduate?

Danzo said "Well done"? More like he would critique and state "acceptable" or "adequate".

Nice to see how uncomfortable both OC and canon characters are at interacting. One of the best scenes in the third batman movie was when the detective noted to Bruce that people who endure a horrible tragedy are only allowed a short period of time in which to recover but are then expected to move on from it. Depending on the amount of realism you want to show, any real recovery could take years. Although it was interesting to note that Tenzo is almost normal in comparison to our little Hyuga princess.

I like that Hikaru isn't showing frequent signs of flashbacks (most common fanfic symptom of PTSD) but instead signs of depression and disassociation. Kid has lived three "lives" so far - one as a modern civilian, one as a shinobi clan child, and one as a Root operative. Someone needs to introduce this kid to therapeutic venting (painting, music, snuggling up with Kakashi's dogs, etc) before she blows. Kind of dreading her response to eventually meeting Hinata, to be honest, if she hasn't learned how to cope a little in advance.

wow, great chapter! I though the beginning of the chapter with Hatake holding his hand on her head was powerful (especially given his whole "cursed" self-image) but then you kept punching in bulls-eyes. Greatly appreciate this read

Interesting progression. So how much did Danzo learn about canon? Did snake face or Tobi learn anything?

interesting point-of-view: an adult in a child's body, aware of some politics from the anime/manga but rather naive in real life

Suddenly I'm reminded of mikasa's scarf (although without the tragic associated backstory). Is this Naruto going to be going through academy wearing a scarf instead of googles?

Story of mami was well done, concise and poignant

suddenly the pic for this story makes sense

That was adorable.
Anyhow love the story and looking forward to the next chapter.
Good luck with your issues, I know where you're coming from, honestly, so you have my sympathy. I hope you get through it, and I'll be silently supporting you from the internet.
(I suggest cuddling many cats, that always helped me)