Great story. Waiting to read more.

Powerful!

Noooooo Blaine! Great writing! Can't wait to see what happens next... 3

I'm glad they're back together, but that leaves Dave in the dust, who did nothing wrong. I hope you resolve him well...

But that scene was so tender, between Kurt and Blaine. And you handled it so well too. Blaine is unstable and Kurt was so understanding. Nicely done.

Dave and Blaine are dating? That seems...sudden. The last we saw them together, they were brand new friends. That jump is a little...jarring.

The ending to chapter five is making me nervous. Blaine's sudden departure has Dave really worried, but Kurt has no clue about the past. Oooooh - this is good. Good plot choice.

I'm impressed with how you handled Rachel. Very nice.
I'm also impressed with Blaine - he's seemed almost casual about his suicide attempt.

Blaine didn't make a decision to see Kurt, and his friendship with Dave must be confusing. I'm surprised you haven't had Blaine, Dave, and Rachel together yet, but I'm sure that's coming.

Impressive chapter four.

This is good. It flows well and you write Rachel very well. I like the fear Blaine has and the obligations he's now facing.
I also like that he reached out to Dave, for either comfort or companionship or both.
Well done!

I have a tough time believing Dave would become a French teacher, but you write it so convincingly. I love how they're becoming friends, even if the whole 'kissing your brother' thing felt a little forced.

All in all, another solid, well-written chapter. This is good and I'm going to keep reading.

Ooooooh, this is all kinds of good. You have an amazing knack for words and descriptions that put my work to shame. Your descriptions are so believable and painful and honest and wonderful. And the ending of chapter one makes me really want to keep going.

This is interesting. Good job!