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Guest chapter 6 . 7/19 I LOVE THIS STORY ,, i love soul eater and toradora and this really made me SO HAPPY! i wish it were finished :( its been four years so i don't have much hope, but maybe you will see this! i loved this story, albeit cut short! |
FlitzerJ chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 I know reviewing is kinda late and all but, I cannot just bid farewell to this fic without even saying how much I love this! I don't know if it's completed, or would it ever will be but, Soul's last text felt like a closure enough. I don't know. I ship SoMa but the way you portrayed their relationship/friendship felt like a complete treasure! I love it and I love them! the last chapter felt open, as if anything can happen to them and they'd go through it together. Some questions are left still but, I'm not going to complain about the status of this fic because this has satisfied me in so many ways! First of all, I want to applaud you for how you portrayed Patty Thompson. Out of all the Soul Eater characters, I adore her the most and most people wouldn't give her enough justice. They just view her as this cackling kid with no real personality. I'm not trying to sound bitter, but it's kinda disappointing. Which is why I absolutely love her in your fic! You gave layers to her character and I appreciate that. Also, Soul's dreamy crush on her was very sweet to the point that I'd actually want to see what it'd be like if they were together (oops). But that's a fleeting thought. At the very least, I think they'd be good friends though. I also love how you portrayed the other characters; their personalities, relationships and everything. Incorporating a Toradora concept on Soul Eater was beautiful and I applaud you for your creativity. Everything was well-written, the pace was right, and you captured their roles perfectly. I wished there could be more, and I honestly wanted to see how Soul and Maka would react if Kid and Patty actually got attracted by each other instead of them. It would've been an interesting twist. But, I stand by what I said. I'm satisfied with this read. So without further ado, I thank you for sharing this story. It was beautiful and perfect and you should be proud of this! |
Silly Twin Stars chapter 6 . 10/4/2016 I love this story so much. A friend recommended this to me, and I couldn't believe the genius behind a Toradora AU. How could I not have seen it before! There are so many similarities between the series and you play with them all so well. I am SO ready for the slow burn extravaganza, and I can't wait to see what you do next. Amazing writing and amazing story. I am smitten. |
Graybones chapter 5 . 9/29/2016 No! More! |
Bluepanda800 chapter 6 . 8/17/2016 Just letting you know I love how you've worked this AU it's toradora esque but it's it's own beast entirely! And it's awesome I really feel like I'm sucked into this world! If this is the last review you see from me it's because there aren't any complaints or questions, this fic feels like my perfect ride! |
Justifiably chapter 1 . 7/31/2016 So, I realized I was a couple chapters behind on this, but then I also realized I haven't caught up in a year basically, so it was high time for a re-read. And ohh man, I almost forgot just how witty your writing is, and how amazing your characterization for Patty is. I loved your Resbang to death, though I'm not sure if I got around to reviewing it - I think it was one of the ones I downloaded for Peru and read approximately five times, but the depth you give the Thompsons is incredible. More than anything, the blend of heart and truly funny writing is amazing in this, and I found myself laughing at several parts. Bonus, the humor is super clever, and relevant to the story, as opposed to being made up of throw-away jokes or contained to slapstick moments. I also love how you adapted this as an alternate universe, keeping the theme of Toradora but still instilling a ton of originality as well as keeping the Soul Eater cast true to their nature. I just got super excited for the rest of my re-read, and of course to catch up on the later updates. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/27/2016 This chapter is super good I loe the conersation soul and aka had sorry y keyboard is broken but your writing akes up for it |
slashley chapter 6 . 5/27/2016 I've discovered I really enjoy SoMa college AUs. And AUs where they don't get along at first. I also just really enjoy your writing. In general. Keep up the great work! _ |
chelsea-chee chapter 6 . 5/18/2016 Interesting...wondering why Maka decided to ask Soul for the favor... But now that Kid is no longer an option, all that's left is Patty and then the true relationship can start! Thanxs! :) :p ;) |
BatheMeInSprinkles chapter 6 . 5/2/2016 I just had to sit down and physically type out how much this story means to me. I have never seen it read Soul Eater, but I'm familiar with the big characters and the ships. Thanks to you, and your lovely writing, I am sooooo in live with Maka and Soup being and growing into two great characters. I love love LOVE TORADORA, and seeing the skeleton of the plot used to have these two prickly peeps being brought together in this college AU makes me sooooo happy. I can't wait to see what's in store for Maka and Soul and their friends. And I can't wait to see what else you write up! Count me as a faithful follower of your work - |
Rosar chapter 6 . 5/1/2016 I really enjoy reading this keep up the amazing writing |
bibah chapter 5 . 2/12/2016 As soon as I read your story, I went back and finished watching ToraDora (how could I have put it on hold for so long?) and now I'm desperate for the conclusion of Soul Eater ToraDora. Love the story so far. |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/18/2016 THIS IS SO CUTE I love the plot and the way you write the characters and the story is getting really good and now I'm pissed at Star Frat and Liz as Sexy lil Bo Peep was the best thing ever and please keep writing this because this is one of my favorite fics ever! |
hornet22 chapter 5 . 1/18/2016 Loved the update! Seriously, i LOVED it |
spiritgirl1 chapter 5 . 1/17/2016 Eric Whitacre? Are you a closer choir nerd? Because honestly, that man is a God and I never thought I'd see his name anywhere in, well, anything non-choral related. That made me so excited though. When I first heard white stars name, I was like, "wait. Is this a reference to our lord and savior?" But I thought that there was no way that would be the case. But then you, in your forever, everlasting glory, have Soul mention the composer. I screamed a little internally when I read that. Honestly, this was a great chapter and the plot is moving along quite nicely, but the Whitacre reference made it the best one yet. |