This was hard to read not in a bad way but because abe was harming himself i could like feel the pain it was powerful for me. Good job!

I ENJOY THIS VERY MUCH THANKS FOR WRITING THIS I LOVE THIS AND YOU SHOUPD WRITE MORE OF HANAI AND TAJIMA HUEHUE :3

A bit cheesy, but it does touch upon a few very serious issues realistically enough, so It's good. Could have used some more closure though.

Love that story ! Going to read the following NOW ! Thank you for writing !

Hey this was really good. I usually don't read shorter fanfics (I like to dive in and never leave the story lol) but I'm REALLY glad I did this time. I CAN'T wait for the sequel. Keep up the awesome job :-) Oh also If your looking for a Beta I'd like to help. My friends and I started a group called the Bitter Betas (because we're all writing a book so we beta for each other). We like helping out other authors so let us know if you're interested Kay ) my email is

Off topic was just about to go read a Sekai Ichi Hatsukoi fic when I noticed that you were thinking of writing one. You should totally go for it )

Some sort of continuation would be nice. An appearance from another team could be an interesting factor too.

Where is my story?(yes I claim it...jk...ish) but seriously where did you go? I miss u! I love this story so much I've reread it three times hoping for updates! Hope ur life is well and nothing is troubling u. Or if ur just having writers block u could message me or leave a comment on my story at Archive of our own. I am Lupustrous .

I just need to put my review as this account!
if this is not done yet please finish this! i have been put into an emotional roller coaster while i am reading this fiction! and GOD I LOVE YOU! for doing this! everything is good... i feel Abe's insecurity and Mihashi's worries... and i really love to kill Abe's father when i read that part... i can say that this story is also a good one because a person can grab some lessons to learn from this story, like being careful in what you say to others because we don't really know what can it do to others.. and like words are stronger than actions... hahaha i have use a little pyschology to elaborate this story for myself... and to end my review, i just simply want to commend this unique plot it is truly inspiring :) keep it up.

Do u know how ironic it is that I checked this story today? But back to the main reason I'm here...I NEED MOOOOOOORRRRREE! Also thank you for this wonderful chapter! More wonderfulness please!

If ur okay with doing a long story or at least four mor chapters, could u go from shy to full on? Or have one really hardcore yaoi scene? Idk maybe Abe could start feeling depressed from lack of immediate arm action and feel worthless or something and Mihashi shows him he isn't. Also maybe a chapter w/ Abe having feelings for Mihashi? If ur willing please write long! Lik maybe 19 chaps I it's not too much cuz I enjoy ur writing a lot. And asking for hardcore is just my pervy yaoi side. Lol this is a great story either way!

i love how smart this story is. how unlike other stories, mihashi isnt worried so much about being he only one who can fix this because its unrealistic to expect himself to. its such a great detail

This is a really cool trip into tajima's psyche as well. are we gonna see more of the teams reactions? keep at it!

For some reason, despite ending there, the story felt ended to me.

The characterization is like a other side of canon that I fail to see. I really like reading fictions where Mihashi is on the strong side, rather than Abe. You've written a wonderful fic, and now you're even continuing it. (I haven't read the update yet; I'm planning to read it later when it's done)

It wouldn't be so bad if you add in the succeeding chapters (if they fit in the timeline) some short scenes to tell improvements on the previous pair, just so that I could see some more ending on the, as what you've already mention, "kind of like cliffhanger" story.

Keep up the good work!

Ok REALLY HAPPY! I was scared to hope u would update so fast... Actually when my iPod was loading the page it didn't show the top yet an I thought the story had vanished...was bout to cry...anyway love the mental demons and negitivity that is very real life. Also if u ever need ideas to bounce just ask and I can come up w/ a bunch which could lead to other ideas :) just u know if ur blocked or something :) will Tajima cry?! Idk y, but i love it when they cry...I'm weird. This is now established. So just saying I love it, please keep the length as it is so fulfilling, and I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! That is all for thisoment in time.

Ok I have been following them for a while now and I didn't even far to look for a whole year reading YJ and Static to pass the time. I cam back and BAM! Awesome story recent! Omg(osh)! Please update as soon as ur able and keep the story going! I love them this way so much! Its cute! And lol possessed arm lol. Are u gonna get...heavier w/ sexy stuff in later chaps? Cuz it's ok if j don't, but M section gives some freedom *waggled eyebrows*... so just wanted to say awesome story and thank you and please continue!