Just started and I love the way you write Samus. I think it’s a perfect portrayal. She is very feminine but very tough, just as she should be. Also, that was such a cool spin on everything with the Chozo and Forerunner. Super excited to read the rest!

Hey, this is interesting... Thought I wonder... is there a 1st chapter of this series?

so... one simple question... what happened to chief? really i don't know how else to word that or i would. in any case, i reccomend finding some way to... i guess plug that plot hole?

Cool that you got to the end! Didn't like that it was short but it was very engrossing. I am definately going to read through the rest!

Cool, got a little back story to Samus here. Interesting that you made her out to be Ancient human before the Forerunners devolved them.

She would of had to walk quite the distance to reach the room under the Library.

Cool! She is immune to the Flood! Suck it you overgrown pitcher plant!

Great chapter.

Oh, what a rude awaking. To learn that you have been sleeping for more than 100,000? Sheesh!

Seems like The Librarian saved her.
Than the Covenant think she is Forerunner? Lol.

Anyway, great start to the story. Gonna keep reading.

Alrighty! I have been looking for a decent halo metroid for a while. I am glad I found it.

YES go Darkburst! That is one of my favorite weapons she has. :)

Time for the final chapter :)

Hehehe :)

That was AWESOME loved the battle and use of weapons. :)

Now I am enjoying this story :)

Interesting, if a bit short. The nerfing of the Power Suit is a bit irritating, but understandable.

Personally I don't think the prophets as power hungry their just stupid OK their both but technically killing everything won't get them more power