I am really looking forward to the next chapters. Please update :)

hello, will they rejoin their dimension now and then because of the TWT ? because 3 of 4 of the champions are on the crew ! to read you soon.

Love it so far. I look forward to the next chapters.

this is good.. cant wait for more

Great Chapter. As a Star Trek-Fan I would say that Sentence that Harry said to Cortana was a Reference to Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country. Kirks Last Order as Captain of the Enterprise.

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it is from peter pan.
and anyone who is over the age of 10 should know that...

You asked me to check this version out. I did until I hit ALL the SAME fuck ups as the first version.

Harry still magically knows about his many lordships out of nowhere. Harry still yells about 'platinum style' whatever the hell THAT means with Hermione and Nev, again out of nowhere.

And worst, Angelina the SIXTH YEAR is STILL somehow in some classes with Luna, the THIRD YEAR.

So what, exactly did you think was improved here? You still don't seem to know anything about HP canon and just seem to make shit up on the fly. Change canon, fine, but it must have some explanation! Not just be randomly tossed in and we're expected to be able to follow your scattershot approach.

Seriously, you need to focus a lot better on making sense.

Awesome chapter.

Awesome first chapter.

Fun chapter, this should be a good story...

Looking forward to reading more.

In the Hogwarts library Harry is with the chasers not 'seekers', also more time with Gringotts would have been good