Reviews for The One Who Was Invisible
Guest chapter 22 . 6/16/2018
Lol I need to memorize that list of words
Fire and Ice chapter 17 . 6/16/2018
RAVENCLAW RULES
yani chapter 15 . 5/6/2013
Around ten years later...

I like the gecko :) awsome story by the way :)
Angie chapter 11 . 8/6/2012
You misspelled Marauder.
Anonymous chapter 10 . 8/6/2012
The Wizarding hospital is called Saint Mungo's NOT Saint Mango's.
Corr chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
Americans are not stupid, dear. Im an old english lady myself, and no one in britain does anybody belive so
Red on the Head00 chapter 13 . 3/18/2010
Eh I think the Gecko was WAY cooler! lol

~Red.
theForgottenTear chapter 10 . 5/26/2009
i love the comment about your sister. lol
Lady Knight Keladry chapter 31 . 5/8/2009
It was okay. I laughed a few times where I wasn't supposed to but overall it was fine. MOst of the earlier chatpers seemed a little boring; it was more like you were telling me what was happening instead of describing it. It got a bit better toward the end though.
featherfinger chapter 8 . 4/28/2009
I loved that adapted Night before Christmas poem you did, It was awesome. I don't think Lily would have given in so easily, and it would have been nice if you had shown us Lily having fun rather than just telling us. You know you occasionally miss out words or letters when you're writing.
featherfinger chapter 2 . 4/28/2009
Intriguing, poor Lily, I'm kind of glad you had her knocked out, that way she wouldn't be able to consciously feel the pain they inflicted. Please tell me James left those flowers!
featherfinger chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
ooh interesting, though it would have been nice to see how everyone else views her outside the library too.
jamie9573 chapter 15 . 8/7/2007
You are American, like the Geico gecko, don't like makeup, are proud of your nerdiness, don't appear to care about dressing how the 'popular' people do, and read The Mists of Avalon and Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. Weird, me too. My muse's name (or at least I think she is a muse) is Adriane, derived from the Greek Ariadne, you go by Alriadne, slightly creepy but mega awesome! I'd PM this, but my computer isn't cooperating. My song vote,(though it really doesn't matter not) would be FNT.
jamie9573 chapter 4 . 8/7/2007
I may be misunderstanding something, but in the last paragraph of chapter four you should probably change the librarian's name, as Madam Pomfrey is the school nurse.
jamie9573 chapter 3 . 8/7/2007
This seems well written, but you have some spelling errors. Dumbledore needs an e on the end, the hospital is St. Mungos, and Gryffindor is spelled incorrectly as well. I never thought about skipping grades at Hogwarts, I guess I just assumed that the classes were challenging enough. Oh well, good job anyways.
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