Wasn't expecting this to turn out the way it did. It's an intriguing set up

Poor Percy! Bill, Charlie, save him!
Please make this longer, please.

Such an interesting pairing. Unique one-shot. Very dark. Well done.

This was so good! It would be amazing if you turned it into a story but I understand if not. Some stories are better left alone. (I'd still love it though. Hahah)

I hope there will be more maybe?

I personally like this pairing. I think there's a part of Tom that looks at Percy and sees some of himself, and because of that he (in my head-canon) just wants to reach out and take. To grab and pull and claim, to place his mark on the redhead and force him to submit. I can see him craving the power and feeling of complete and utter dominance that would come from forcing himself on Percy and I love it.

Thanks for writing!

Wow...that was intense...I've never read this pairing before, but I like it! This was a good story! :) Nicely done! :D

I don't think this was a strange pairing at all. Actually, it's quite intriguing and I do see the similarities between Tom and Percy. I'd like to see more stories written about this pairing. :) (Either by you or anyone...it's fine by me! :P ) You did a great job, even with the dark elements!...honestly...it does help create a more intense depth and gives it character.