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Hahahah I liked this chapter It was quite funny :) And you used defiantly again instead of definitely!

Dude wow! Hats off to you! This was one bloody amazing chapter! Not to mention that it took be like an hour to read this :p But well it was worth it. :)) And how do you even manage to write such long chapters? :) I can hardly ever write more that 1500 words!

I liked the last chapter too. Why do you think that it was not good?
Liked this one as well! Update soon

Well it was a nice chapter! I enjoyed reading this! :) Update soon!
~thetriomuggleborn

God :p I wasn't expecting the kiss but hell you have written it nicely! I'll give you 10 for the idea! And the P.O.V thing too and 9 for Jordan's characterization. :)) And as you asked us for corrections I'll say that you should keep the paragraphs short and start a new dialogue from a new line! And also dialogues are 'xyz' and not "xyz" other than it's perfect! :))
P.S: Loved it! Update soon!

I love reading this 3 ;) Maybe you could add some events you wanted in the book? That would be awesome to read! Just saying :p xx :)

Oh man! Why do you even ask if we enjoyed this chapter or not?! How could we not enjoy this! This is amazing! And also the longest chapter I've ever read in any fanfic! You really worked hard on this! Well, it was worth it! Update soon. xx :)

I hate bill so much though I don't like calling him crazy cos I'm crazy too well nt basically crazy but yeah a bit crazy like not mad crazy okay u get it :p Nd yeah I love nd njy ur fanfic! Though Brandon's reaction made me laugh a bit :p
P.S Update soon. xx :)

I think Brandon is a bit like Luke but I think it's a good thing because I love Luke's character and now Brandon's too and tbh I really don't like Peter, good thing he'll die at the very end. He will right? in your story?

I really do like Brandon now. First I thought he is just coming in between the perfect couple. I think this story is going to be great :D Update soon.

Brandon and Jordan are going to be together? :'( I really liked Jordan and Luke as a couple :D But I hope Brandon and Jordan are going to be equally good.