I liked the Pirates of the Carbian refrence

What is he going to make the ultimate killer robot then? Or will it be penny?

did you seriously reference "A friend in Need"? lol literally the references in this story have me dying.

wish it wasn't on Hiatus but alas...

also can't wait til next chap of elementalist...

seriously reading this while waiting on that chap has shown the changes in your style! props to ya!

Thousands of clones across the galaxy are rolling in their makeshift/non-existant graves for being called stormtroopers.

Anakin Skywalker is that Jaune? Just thinking nothing much

so Ruby does a yoda when helping jaune. I like it

This is so lame...

Cool.

I think the fact that I just read this whole thing speaks for itself but I would like to see this continued. It’s an interesting concept.

BS, Ozpin and Glynda would immediately recognize the use of the dark side with force lighting. If the fact that is was so recently updated indicates that you’re planning to continue this story, then that needs to be changed.

I’m not a big fan of the whole “Jaune getting manipulated by Roman” thing anyway but if you’re gonna do it, then make damn sure that the good guys aren’t idiots.

To Wild Fox Fire, why the fact this is a Jaune x Blake is one of the best parts.

Gullible Jaune is gullible.

I can't help but notice it says the pairing is jaune x blake up top...
I'm a little scared

This fic died before we could get to the Knightshade, what is what most of us wanted, instead were stuck we this shitty Arkos crap instead.

You thought an RvB reference would slip pasr a Freelancer?!
-PolishFreelancer115