This was one of the most disappointing books i have read so far,and I read everyday.I deleted it from my book list.

This is an amazing story and I haven't even finished reading it yet! I hope You continue to write!

I like your story, but i think you need to work on your present and past tense. I gets really confusing when you read a sentance that is writen in past tense and then in present tense and back to past. i know this story is finished but, your should go back and edit it now.

I really like your story and i think it would make it better if this was fixed. I like the joking attitude between Ron and Harry. Them waking Ron with a pillow fight was a great idea! and then Harry punching Ron when he was asleep, i've acually done that before and lost a friend over it, i like the way you made them joke about it. i also really like the communik, it's a great concept!

Keep up the good work!

did remus destroy the picture in his werewolf form?

No offence or anything but harry is way OOC (out of character)

you keep useing different tenses and it driving me NUTS! stick with ONE tense! Please! (if that sounded rude, i didn't mean it to be)

ohh I LOVE IT! HARRY IS ALIVE! ye and in the end everithing turned out just PERFECT! you are an outstanding writer.. keep up the good work.. maybe another fic?.. :)

Oh my God! Harry is dead.. no no i'm truly craing! i hate sad stories.. oh my.. it's so sad... Harry... Siriuss... I was heart broken when James died, but when Harry died... oh. i'm craing... but in the end it is great (sad) but great story!

i pick a d and e for the poll now bye gonna read some more

strider?

where... no never mind i know where you got it.

but onto a diffrent note great story so far.

i'm going to finish reading now

This is the second fanfic I've read and if they're all this good I'll never get any sleep.I'm going to go read your other story now so, bye-bye for now.

That was a vary good story one of the best I've read so far. I'll go check out your other stories now.

hey i loved the story, great plot. I have one suggestion though. You might want to read back over it because you made a lot of errors. It's confusing sometimes, ecspecially when you have ron and harry talking, you get stuff like this: Ron said, "Are you ok harry?" "Yeah" Ron said. Like ya mix up the names... and other errors like that. But over all, I love it! Great job! you are an excellent writer!

i chose answer a harry better not die

OMG wat a great story! It sux that ur not writing another cause i would read and review. You could make a great author some day so keep up the good work.

thanx 4 a great fanfict!