Reviews for Lucy's Betrayal
ajmaru chapter 1 . 5/30
Please update the story just became really interesting at the end. I hope you're hanging in there and are doing ok. :-))
Alex Sage chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
Don't live the story hanging like that update more please Its really interesting
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
Keep goin'! Doin good! Please keep going.
Mikuu chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Seguiii x diossssss! no me dejes con la duda รป siiiii
Mara fray chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Forget teams natsu you have ace and fluffy now Lucy be happy please ;_;
chloe.callebaut9999 chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
Awsome story can't Wait for the nest chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Please make a sequal
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
When the next chapter gonna be update? I wanna know what happen next...
Blanke-Slate chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
Ooh! I like this story a lot! Can't wait to see Ace and Luffy beat Team Natsu to the ground!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
you are an idiot hurry up with the next chapters idiot my god i could have finished five chapters in three hours hurry up man oh and um a girl
Alexandria Ackerman chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
that is so awesome please update ASAP, :D
rasputin123 chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
Plezz update soon
crossover chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
hahahah I like the part when ace and smoker was crashed into a wall and happy reunion when lucy meet up with ace and luffy but Im surprise that sanji didn't said mellorine oh well expect the unexpected anyway great story ;D