Reviews for Promises, the HyLarryous Version
Rebmul chapter 10 . 12/23/2019
oh boy hes gonna be pissed
Rebmul chapter 5 . 12/23/2019
I cant wait for her to find out hes alive and him to tell her to fuck off ooh I hope the duke beats her
DanDrake chapter 10 . 9/25/2019
Nooooo not a cliffhanger! Please update soon I want to see jaunes reaction!
Masen Lakain chapter 10 . 2/28/2019
I've really enjoyed this story. I'm really looking forward to the eventual "talk" between Jaune and Yang about Amy's lineage. I'm also curious about marron, and if we'll see her again. And of course the hopefully soon reappearance of P-word. Also, Jaune is about to kill a paparazzi. Great work, I look forward to your next chapter.
The Exiled Darkness chapter 10 . 2/10/2019
So Mini-Tai strikes again. At least Taiyang had the decency to stick within his own team. Jaune—I mean Mini-Tai however, is the type to branch out to other teams. Good for him though.
john8271 chapter 6 . 1/20/2019
When's the next update coooome ooooon iv red the fic three times now while waiting
0804wolf chapter 9 . 12/21/2018
Taking a guess that Marron is a relative of Pyrrha
0804wolf chapter 10 . 11/21/2018
Shit just hit the fan. Willing to bet Pyrrha has just found out that Jaune was playing KIA and no one broke the news to her, not that they would want to given she was root cause. Great story can wait to see Pyrrha's reaction to Jaune being alive and more or less starting a family with Yang. Can only hope Pyrrha doesn't take it to hard.
0804wolf chapter 10 . 11/21/2018
please update very good story
Hecseferblade chapter 10 . 10/23/2018
Wow I was into the story up to the last chapter. That ending REALLY hooked me in! Jaune finds out before Yang can work up the courage to tell him. Will he explode in anger again? Will Amy finally be able to properly embrace her dad?

Also, what will happen with him and ruby? Will she admit her feelings or will she find a way to get over him? Are the tabloids onto something at hinting toward a full/partial harem?

Will Jaune ever find the down time to catch up on all the x-ray and vav comics he’s missed out on? Find out in the next episode of “Promises, from scrawny noodle to DADDY”
campione278 chapter 10 . 10/22/2018
Amazing chapter. I wonder how sad pyrrha is and regrets her decisions. Hehe specially with it coming out that Jaune has a daughter with Yang.
RGNCJNLeBeau chapter 10 . 8/13/2018
Sooooo damn happy that you are back writing this.
Edward Verdant chapter 10 . 8/12/2018
I love this story, but sometimes the conversations can be a bit hard to follow because you don't always start a new line with a new speaker, just putting that out there.
Otherwise, good job so far, keep it up! _
Fizz chapter 10 . 8/8/2018
Well everyone's saying in the reviews the truth has been revealed finally but I don't think so cause it was revealed by a magazine full of lies and bs about him and his friends so what's keeping him from thinking what he just read about Amy being his daughter is also made up bs, is the dna test results in it? If not then where's the proof and even if it is people can photoshop and fake images and data. Frankly if Jaune believes what he just read (again from a magazine that was slandering him and his friends) then he's an gullible idiot, sure it's true but the source he learned it from should easily be considered false information.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/6/2018
Well Pyrrha had a kid and they seem to have inherited her skills even if they didn't get her humility.
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