This is so spot-on. 3 You did an absolutely AMAZING job of capturing Tia's inner thoughts. It was such poetry. She had a rough story, and I think you did a great job summing it all up for her. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read for Lufia II. Thank you sooo much for such a wonderful read! :

I like this story! I don't hate Selan, but I wish she hadn't met Maxim when she did. I think he should've married Tia... Either way, very nice story.

First thing, I agree to liking both Tia and Selan. It's too bad we lose Tia down the line, and Selan is there. But I do like both Tia and Selan, so you won't see anything negative on that from me.

Now, this is a very strong piece. At first, I wasn't really sure if this was Tia actually talking. I mean, I never thought of her this way before. But the more I read, the more I could feel Tia's pain.

I also like how, even though she wanted to hate Maxim and Selan, she just couldn't do it. Probably because it isn't like her. And hating fate? Yeah, that part I could see very clearly.

My only confusion comes slightly in the beginning, where Tia says that two out of three heroes returned to say that Gades is no more. See, what's puzzling to me about this is that while true that Guy and Dekar returned with the news, they didn't return alone. Tia and Selan, who were both really worried about Maxim, came to check on him. So, I think despite their worry, we would have four people who know that Gades isn't around, but isn't so sure about Maxim... until he happens to appear.

Aside from that though, I thought this was very well done! I know you haven't been writing as much as you have previously, but if you ever write another Lufia story, I'd take a look. I'd write one myself even, but I don't have a plot.

Anywho, keep up the good work!

"Of all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are: it might have been."

Don't know who said that, but it fits Maxim/Tia perfectly.

What a lovely story! Poor Tia! Sadly, I know the same feeling! Your fic is beautiful, and the way you write is refreshing... even when your story is a bit sad.

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I would like to read more from you.

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TAKE CARE!

It almost made me cry, I found it really really pretty! You understood Tia's charachter absolutely, and that's the point in writing angst (my favourite fanfiction genre ). You're such a good writer, I'd love to read more things you've written.

Poor Tia. I really liked her in the game. I loved the way she snapped at Maxim hehe. That was wonderfully written. *jealous of your talent* :D.

Wow. I liked it a lot... Tia is my favorite character from the game and I have to admit that I liked her so much that when she left I stopped playing. 0_0;; I'm so weird... See, I don't play games for... well... games! I play for their characters and well... if my favorite character is gone then so am I. Bleh...

That's really good. I finally was able to read it, Kitt. *grin*
As good as me.

This was written... just wow. At the risk of sounding a bit egotistical, there isn't much around that really impresses me, but this, wow. Your metaphors and symbolism are deep, very well written and beyond all, real. The portrayal of Tia is magnificent, showing her conflicting thoughts with meaning and emotion. You have swept me off my feet and I'd love to see you write more. Good job.

Thank you.

Tia was one of m favorite charatcers ever in a game and Im tired of seeing her name dragged through the dirt by fanboys who thought she sucked becuase Selan was hotter.

Thank you so much.

This story is absolutely brilliant. The style is lovely, the tone is perect, and I love how you made Tia bitter. I would be, too! This is good stuff. One of the best Ive ever read. I love this story so much!

Kudos from a great lover of all things Tia! She was a great character, and Id love to see more people who like her and respect her for teh great heroine she was.

Thanks again!

Oh, this is so sad!

Really well written, I loved it!

This is really good. I hate to admit but, once Tia was gone, I kinda forgot about her. She did come up in my thoughts every once in a while, but for the most part, well, she was absent.

Thanks for reminding me of her and giving me an interesting perspective on her thoughts. Maybe this time I won't forget.

great story! I'vealways like stories that are about what happened to Tia after she left someday I'll write one too XD I hope you write more soon!

yeah, Ive always felt sorry for Tia... She follows Maxim from the very beginning, going through all that, and what does she end up with? Nothing.

(sheds a tear)